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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 48 |
May 17 |
Reply |
Thanks Beverly. |
May 20th |
| 48 |
May 17 |
Reply |
Thank you, Margaret. I've been advised before not to direct viewers' eyes away from what's most important. Seems I needed a reminder. |
May 20th |
| 48 |
May 17 |
Reply |
Thank you, Neil. That's the exact kind of feedback I'm looking for. I will definitely take your advice. |
May 20th |
| 48 |
May 17 |
Comment |
Great job! I agree with the narrower DOF. The only thing I'd also like to see done is cropping a little off the top and bottom, or at least the bottom, so as not directly on the inside of her elbow. |
May 16th |
| 48 |
May 17 |
Comment |
Nice. I'm especially drawn to macro and close-ups. I agree with the white, and the purple. I wonder if the white is a glare, and if a reflector or diffuser would've helped. Also, I think I would've liked to see just a bit more DOF, to accentuate the veins. |
May 16th |
| 48 |
May 17 |
Comment |
Nice. Just a little more cloning is needed though, IMO. The white sidewalk takes my eye from left to right, then circles back to the black and red cars. After they're gone, this will be beautiful! |
May 16th |
| 48 |
May 17 |
Comment |
Nice catch. Great thinking using your flash. I get too excited and forget about the benefit it offers outdoors too. Yes, getting rid of the screen is important. I like your DOF and background too. The only thing I'm having difficulty with is trying to figure out what the white is on both sides of his top beak. Is that a seed? Is it on both sides? If not, I'd darken or clone it out, or whichever part is not the seed. I hope this makes sense. |
May 16th |
| 48 |
May 17 |
Comment |
Yes, I would clone the poles out. I assume they're lights and speakers, but since it's not obvious what they are and what purpose they serve, I'd get rid of them. Also, I like that we can't see the faces, it allows me to imagine myself in one of the seats and feel the excitement. |
May 16th |
| 48 |
May 17 |
Comment |
Interesting. I like that the title gave us just a clue as to what it is. |
May 16th |
6 comments - 3 replies for Group 48
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6 comments - 3 replies Total
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