Activity for User 763 - Joan Funk - joanfunk7@gmail.com

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16 Mar 19 Comment Very nice still life. I like the collection of objects you have chosen. Depth of field is the photographer's choice. You have chosen a shallow depth of field with the front of the still life (the pasta and herbs) being the sharpest focus.

I would prefer to have all the elements of the still life totally within the boundaries of the photo, rather than showing just part of the pasta, the herbs, and the grater, but that's just my preference.		 Mar 20th
16 Mar 19 Comment Beautiful unusual image of a swimmer in action. The radial blur is a perfect surround for her swimming. I especially like the colors blurring at the top of the image. Good choice of where to put the blur, leaving the swimmer and the water in front of her and dripping from her arms intact. I would remove the white reflections on her arm. Mar 20th
16 Mar 19 Comment Great capture of the bird having dinner. Good ripples in the water directing attention to the action. I would crop out the lower third of the green island (it's too dominant) and I would make the green much darker and less harsh - probably by removing the yellow and de-saturating the green. I like the island in the foreground - but smaller and less bright. Mar 20th
16 Mar 19 Comment You did a great job of bringing the image out of darkness in the lower half and giving it great color throughout. The mountains in the background are spectacular, and the village in the foreground makes it even better, especially with the red roof that enhances it.

I would crop out the 1/2 people on the far left. The image is a little too HDR'd and Drama'd for me. I'd prefer it cut back a little.		 Mar 20th
16 Mar 19 Comment You did an amazing job of getting such a beautiful bird from the dark image. The colors are wonderful. The noise is fairly low and the sharpness is fairly high.

I like your crop, giving the bird room to fly forward without leaving too much negative space. I would crop out the darker waves in the lower part of the image, since it's no longer clear that they are waves and are distracting.		 Mar 20th
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