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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 16 |
Feb 19 |
Comment |
I too like the lighting and the composition, but agree with Bogdan about sharpness and the cutoff bottom of leg. You are fortunate to live near Flamingo Gardens so you really can have a "next time" with more depth of field and the bottom of the leg. |
Feb 17th |
| 16 |
Feb 19 |
Comment |
Beautiful shot of the building on the island. It stands out so well because it is framed by the mist and the water - and because of your contrast improvements.
I agree with Mohanan about the negative space being too much. I would either crop left and bottom as he did, or just remove some of the top and bottom, as he suggested. The building on the island should rule. |
Feb 17th |
| 16 |
Feb 19 |
Comment |
I too prefer the original. It seems to have to much more sharpness in the details. I suggest going back to the original, and converting it to black and white in a program like Nik Color Efex. Then you will preserve the great detail, while removing the distracting color. |
Feb 14th |
| 16 |
Feb 19 |
Comment |
Great bird shot. Love his/her eye - and coloring. I would crop out the post in the lower front, and also some of the right and left of the image. I don't think the bird needs quite so much space to fly into, and I would prefer to see less of what is on the left. Then there would no longer be too much clutter, just a lovely background for a beautiful bird. |
Feb 14th |
| 16 |
Feb 19 |
Comment |
The original image is terrific, and the new image you created is equally terrific. You have done a great job of using radial blur to give the image a second life. Two very dramatic photos. |
Feb 14th |
| 16 |
Feb 19 |
Comment |
Thanks everyone for your helpful comments and suggestions. I am traveling in our boat this month with poor internet but I should be able to write my comments tonight. |
Feb 13th |
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