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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 5 |
Sep 21 |
Comment |
Very different. Have you thought about putting stars in? |
Sep 9th |
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| 5 |
Sep 21 |
Comment |
I agree with comments saying that there is no focal point but we take photos for ourselves and if you like it that's the important thing. I would never have thought about taking an image like this. |
Sep 9th |
| 5 |
Sep 21 |
Comment |
I particularly like Oliver's version. However he says, "I also wanted to make one portion of the photograph reasonably sharp... kind of like an anchor for the rest of the image. I selected the nearest tree on the far left" I agree with the idea but I think this drags our view to the left and out of the image. I would sharpen a tree in the centre of the image.
Your say, in response to Oliver, "trees feel a bit too autumnal in yours". They do but that for me adds to the image. |
Sep 9th |
| 5 |
Sep 21 |
Reply |
Thanks Oliver. I think your version is an improvement for his face. It brings out more of his character. Also darkening the background makes us look more at his face. I would also agree with Richard about removing the key and lock. |
Sep 7th |
| 5 |
Sep 21 |
Comment |
This is a beautiful picture with the blossom, the bridge including the people and the buildings within the trees. You might consider cropping the bottom, you have some nice reflections in the water but for me they distract from the blossom. I have cropped so the the bridge is on a third. |
Sep 2nd |
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| 5 |
Sep 21 |
Comment |
I think your image is improved with the crop. The sky is better than the original but the sky and the land do not go together. To me the light source on the original is not in the same place as the edited version. In the original it seems to be shining onto the end of the barn whilst in the edited version, looking at the sky it seems to be coming from the sky behind the barn. Thus the end of the barn and the roof are too light. I would also have expected much longer shadows.
I looked at your image on Group 62 but initially it was last months of your grandson. I thought it was excellent. |
Sep 2nd |
| 5 |
Sep 21 |
Comment |
I like the composition and elements within the image but for me the picture is spoilt because the red is oversaturated. Otherwise a very good still life. |
Sep 2nd |
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6 comments - 1 reply Total
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