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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 56 |
Aug 23 |
Comment |
It has all been said, but what I like about your painting is you created more contrast between the background petals and the center. This makes the center demand more attention. Very colorful. |
Aug 30th |
| 56 |
Aug 23 |
Comment |
I love the color harmony and the way the leaves at the top tend to frame the lily. Your painted is excellent. There is another idea, just make a selection of the lily and make it bigger and keep all that beautiful surrounding vegetation. This is a very rough visual feedback and just an idea. You may want to darken the upper left leaf too to keep the interest on the lily. |
Aug 30th |
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| 56 |
Aug 23 |
Comment |
What a beautiful painting . The face features are outstanding and the color harmony so charming. I agree on the hair in your final without the wings but, go back to your one with the wings. Here the hair looks perfect. It is more in keeping with her small face and is not so thick around the sides and more wispy. Love the background and the use of the brayer to give it the artistic look. |
Aug 30th |
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| 56 |
Aug 23 |
Reply |
thank you |
Aug 30th |
| 56 |
Aug 23 |
Reply |
Thank you. |
Aug 29th |
| 56 |
Aug 23 |
Comment |
Hi Pat, the composite is well done and the removal of halos looks fantastic. I have a question on the white water around the paddler- Is this to simulate movement of the water?? You may not need it but with that light from the sky you may wish to highlight his right side just a tad. |
Aug 28th |
| 56 |
Aug 23 |
Comment |
Cindy said it beautifully. In addition, I like your choice of lighting in the center with darker edges. It tends to keep my eye on the image and not wander off. |
Aug 28th |
| 56 |
Aug 23 |
Comment |
Thank you Cindy and Trey. I am entering a show with one of these and so with both your and Trey 's comments, I will enter my additional petal image.
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Aug 28th |
| 56 |
Aug 23 |
Comment |
Here are the changes. I had to create additional leaves and a new petal. Does it look better and more balanced? |
Aug 9th |
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7 comments - 2 replies for Group 56
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7 comments - 2 replies Total
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