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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 56 |
Oct 22 |
Reply |
Thank you, Pat. I used a smoke brush but it needs lots of work and is really too dark for smoke. I am not sure how to use the real puff but I will work on it. Thank you for your kind words. |
Oct 26th |
| 56 |
Oct 22 |
Reply |
Thank you Cindy for your supporting words. |
Oct 26th |
| 56 |
Oct 22 |
Reply |
Yes, the total body look at some merit is how I started but just got lazy and cropped it as I was running late. I will work on this. Thank you. |
Oct 26th |
| 56 |
Oct 22 |
Reply |
Thank you Trey. I will work on the smoke, not sure how I can add the big puff but it certainly is an important element to work on. |
Oct 26th |
| 56 |
Oct 22 |
Reply |
Thank you Trey. I will work on the smoke, not sure how I can add the big puff but it certainly is an important element to work on. |
Oct 26th |
| 56 |
Oct 22 |
Comment |
Some great points have been made. I support Trey's comment on the ear painting difference and perhaps you may want to paint the left ear with the same attractive brush strokes.
You really did a wonderful job with composition and cropping added so much more impact with the Snow Leopard's mesmerizing eyes. Outstanding job.
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Oct 26th |
| 56 |
Oct 22 |
Comment |
Pat, I support your decision to keep the boy in the bottom left. I feel he keeps my eye in the image and offers a solid structure and the yellow tape leads me into the image. I feel it adds to the overall composition and was a good choice.
In addition, his inclusion adds to the story of a Pow-wow event. Your Bliss preset really adds to the image and your treatment of the background to eliminate the bald sky was an outstanding idea, too. I enjoy the warm colors the preset introduced into the image. I love Pow-wow events too. Nicely done. |
Oct 26th |
| 56 |
Oct 22 |
Comment |
Trey, the colors are so brilliant and attractive. They demand that we look at the image and add impact to this outstanding image.
I think Gerhard's suggestion of horizontal rotation has some real merit. Such a move would allow the beard of the Iris to lead the eye into the image as our eye reads left to right. I believe it would add additional strength to your image. I have added a visual feedback of Gerhard's suggestion.
I agree with Pat and Cindy that your paintbrush presets and post-processing add additional impact as well. The petals are just so attractively painted. Nicely done. |
Oct 26th |
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3 comments - 5 replies for Group 56
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3 comments - 5 replies Total
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