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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 56 |
Jan 22 |
Reply |
Thank you, Henry. Thank you for your comment. |
Jan 20th |
| 56 |
Jan 22 |
Reply |
I so agree on the extra blade of grass. I will work a bit more on the eye. Thank you for all your input. So appreciate it. |
Jan 20th |
| 56 |
Jan 22 |
Comment |
Love the motion in the petals and the feather brush strokes. The 3 raindrops are a nice touch, too. Your raindrops could be even larger since they play a significant element role. I agree with Terry on cropping some off the bottom. |
Jan 15th |
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| 56 |
Jan 22 |
Comment |
I like the composition of both the original and the crop. The mountains in the original add an interesting element to the scene. However, the crop is nicely done too. You have a lot of elements of interest: the strong diagonal, the slight curved road, rows of trees and the contrast of the colors. You may want to consider a correction to the orientation because to my eye the trees are not perpendicular and it feels a bit off. However, that may have been your artistic decision. |
Jan 15th |
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| 56 |
Jan 22 |
Comment |
I too love this colorful image. The addition of the birds (3) was a nice touch and making it more painterly brought this image alive. I personally love the blue tones you used as this really makes it appear more as art to my eye.
I agree that having a bit more contrast between the head and background might bring more attention to the buffalo. |
Jan 15th |
| 56 |
Jan 22 |
Comment |
Your choice of background is perfect for this image. I feel your placement of the tents and the dancer was a good composition decision too. The bold colors work here with the sky while the hue is correct you may want to tone it down just a bit.
There does tend to be a feeling to me that the dancer is just pasted, so painting in a bit more of the shadow on the right of the dancer would improve the overall sense of realism. You may want to add a bit of shadow to the right of the tents too.
I enjoy the dancer and her body angle with the tents. It is an attractive image and a huge improvement with the composite of the two. Nicely done. |
Jan 15th |
| 56 |
Jan 22 |
Comment |
The thought you put into the photo paid off. The zig-zag pattern you mention is what draws my eye to the image. I really enjoy all the diagonal lines it presents. Your painting is so much brighter and colorful than the camera capture. Nice work in the more attractive sky and trees. Nicely done. |
Jan 15th |
5 comments - 2 replies for Group 56
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5 comments - 2 replies Total
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