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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 36 |
Aug 17 |
Comment |
Phil, it's a nice composition, however I believe it should be cropped to emphasize the barn, much like Le said. When I down loaded the photo I spotted 2 dust spots on the left side. I usually, go after any dust spots as the first items to correct. I made some modifications to your original photo, cropped to remove the tree on the right, darken the colors in the barn and the foreground. Then I used curves to bring out the barn. |
Aug 12th |
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| 36 |
Aug 17 |
Comment |
Arne, wish I could tell you why, but I really don't know. Maybe it was windy??? |
Aug 12th |
| 36 |
Aug 17 |
Comment |
Arne, I really liked the composition. The forground Boulder leading lines and the mountain edges takes the viewers eye straight to the houses in the background. Nice work on the sky, it really helps the photo. you need to use the polarizer a little more to take the glare away, and it will help you with the sky. I liked your original photo, but would work on the glare. |
Aug 6th |
| 36 |
Aug 17 |
Comment |
Bill, good suggestion. I like it. |
Aug 6th |
| 36 |
Aug 17 |
Comment |
Michael, as usual, you have taken a wonderful shot in Singapore. liked the composition and the reflection, which draws the viewers eye toward thre building. |
Aug 5th |
| 36 |
Aug 17 |
Comment |
Bill, nice work. I liked the way you darken the shadow in fields in the foreground which draws the viewers eye toward sunlight on the background and the moon. Nice adjustment of the colors to bring out the wonderful colors in the sky. |
Aug 5th |
| 36 |
Aug 17 |
Comment |
Le I like your composition, however my eye went to the lightest point on your photo, which was the light in the shy, and then I went to the boat. A viewers eye is almost always drawn the the lightest area in the photo. I suggest you lighten the second boat, which is where I believe, you wanted the viewer to go first. I have attached a sample of your photo with the boat lighten the most. |
Aug 5th |
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7 comments - 0 replies for Group 36
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| 46 |
Aug 17 |
Comment |
Thanks, Paul.
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Aug 12th |
| 46 |
Aug 17 |
Comment |
Paul, nice work. I really enjoy the way straighten the photo so it looks as if you were on a ladder shooting straight at the window. The reflections have been handed very well. I remember you told us how you straightend the photo, but I've forgotten, please explain again. |
Aug 7th |
| 46 |
Aug 17 |
Comment |
Gary, Wanda you comments got me to rethinking about this photo. I've soften the bright light, and Gary I remembered I took this photo with a wide angle lens which distorts the trees in the backgournd, causing them to lean to the right. Here's the revised photo. |
Aug 6th |
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| 46 |
Aug 17 |
Comment |
Nice work, Jeffery, I agree that reversing the leading lines, and getting rid of the dark rust spot improve the photo. Normally I would not like over saturation, but for this photo it really works. |
Aug 5th |
| 46 |
Aug 17 |
Comment |
Wanda, I liked the reverse shot and the composition with the reflection is great. However, I darken the columns, removed the swan, and made a final adjustment in curves. Here is the adjusted photo. Dick |
Aug 5th |
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| 46 |
Aug 17 |
Comment |
Gary, you really worked hard to make this photo work, and work it does. I agree with Wanda that the water needs to be whiten and I believe the sky is too blue. I've made the adjustments using Photoshop Colors. I also brighten up the tree to make it more pronounced. All in all, a very nice shot. |
Aug 5th |
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| 46 |
Aug 17 |
Comment |
Wanda, your eye went where I wanted it go, and from there to the water. I agree the darkest area is moody. |
Aug 5th |
7 comments - 0 replies for Group 46
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14 comments - 0 replies Total
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