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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 22 |
Dec 18 |
Comment |
I see my previous version too. I think my today's version is better? |
Dec 21st |
| 22 |
Dec 18 |
Comment |
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Dec 21st |
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| 22 |
Dec 18 |
Comment |
I don't have it any longer but I try to prepare a similar one today. |
Dec 20th |
| 22 |
Dec 18 |
Comment |
Joseph's proposition is very interesting. I would add a word or two. I would soften the edges and concentrate on the middle of the image. And a drop of orange. I don't have original. Are the highlights blown out? |
Dec 20th |
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| 22 |
Dec 18 |
Comment |
Perfect. I don't know your camera settings but I would suggest to change it to -0.7 EV on the highlights or even -1 EV. |
Dec 20th |
| 22 |
Dec 18 |
Comment |
Impressive. |
Dec 20th |
| 22 |
Dec 18 |
Comment |
When I look at original I see the yellow trousers first and the red hair as second. In presented image it is not clear who is the first and who is the second person. I tried to work with light. |
Dec 20th |
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| 22 |
Dec 18 |
Reply |
I like this version better. One thing I would worked on is the mountains, right side. The mountains are too sharp, I think? |
Dec 20th |
| 22 |
Dec 18 |
Comment |
I think image lacks light, so I prepared my version. |
Dec 20th |
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| 22 |
Dec 18 |
Reply |
Hi, I would not crop.
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Dec 20th |
| 22 |
Dec 18 |
Reply |
Thanks Jerry. You are probably right. Now image is correct but flat. |
Dec 8th |
8 comments - 3 replies for Group 22
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| 47 |
Dec 18 |
Comment |
I think your image is too dark. I don't see any details in the upper part of the image. Perhaps it is my monitor. My proposition is different. |
Dec 28th |
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| 47 |
Dec 18 |
Comment |
It is too pale. I would add more contrast and straighten the image. My proposition follows. |
Dec 28th |
 |
| 47 |
Dec 18 |
Comment |
Great image! I attach my proposition. |
Dec 28th |
 |
| 47 |
Dec 18 |
Comment |
Great image. Good composition. I would add more grey tones to it. |
Dec 28th |
 |
| 47 |
Dec 18 |
Comment |
I would soften the image and crop it on the left side. Proposition attached. |
Dec 28th |
 |
| 47 |
Dec 18 |
Comment |
Great image. Details is OK. Good composition. |
Dec 28th |
| 47 |
Dec 18 |
Comment |
Thank you all and Merry Xmas. I will find time during this holiday to comment your images.
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Dec 25th |
| 47 |
Dec 18 |
Reply |
No, it is not film. |
Dec 24th |
7 comments - 1 reply for Group 47
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15 comments - 4 replies Total
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