Activity for User 706 - Kaylyn Franks - kaylynfranks@gmail.com

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22 Nov 19 Comment Awesome feedback. I wanted more separation with the bottles, but ran out of time. I did not key in on the boldness of the red stripes on the box. It is overpowering now that I look at the image online. Nov 25th
22 Nov 19 Comment The highlights are a bit too bright for me. As I look at the original I see this sweet twinkle of lights at the tips of the cone. i'd play around with enhancing the twinkles. I'd also darken the petals on the right and possibly clone out the petals in the upper left. They appear to be from another flower and create an unbalanced feeling for me.

I hope one of these days I find time to try Topaz!!		 Nov 25th
22 Nov 19 Comment I love zoom bursting and you did a fabulous job capturing this image. The only suggestion I have is tone down the bright head of the mannequin on the right and bright spots to the right of the left mannequins shoulder. Since they are so bright, my eyes are immediately drawn to those areas. I love the angles, lines and shapes in the image. The mannequin on the left guides my eyes to the center of the image and the one on the right guides my eyes to the balls on the right, which then follow the lines up from the balls to the lines that angle back to center....bringing it full circle. Nov 25th
22 Nov 19 Comment What is the story? The light, the colorful balloons or festivities? If it is about the light, I suggest staying closer to the original and bring out the colors of the balloon enhanced by the light and leave the rest dark. Nov 25th
22 Nov 19 Reply I will suggest tweeting the horizon just a tiny bit. The people and the tent are leaning slightly. After doing so the horizon will still be off a bit, but that's because of the angle it was shot. Nov 25th
22 Nov 19 Comment Beautiful festive light. I suggest cropping left and right so that there are only 5 full glasses. I'd tone the highlights down on the middle glass and then darken the background above the rims of the glasses. Nov 25th
22 Nov 19 Comment Too dang fun! I love abstract art, especially brilliant colors. I like all 3 images and don't have anything to add other than well done! Nov 25th
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