Activity for User 705 - Darin Hlavinka - hlavinkas4@yahoo.com

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25 Aug 17 Comment Not sure I could add anything new to help improve this image. I like the overall scene. If you have any action shots of him casting that may add some additional impact. Nice image. Aug 25th
25 Aug 17 Comment Great pictorial image with lots of impact. Through my local camera club we have always been told that the eye always lands at either the sharpest object and/or the brightest part of an image. Here I would suggest maybe either cropping out some of the back area or darkening it down a bit to get more attention on the main subject in the foreground (and lightening up the woman as Audrey suggested). Overall great capture. Aug 25th
25 Aug 17 Comment Really great idea here. Like what was said above, with some more post-processing in Photoshop this can be even better. Nicely done. Aug 25th
25 Aug 17 Comment I agree with all the above comments. What I could add to this is that I really like the composition, all the lines coming in from the edges and leading right to the fire burst which is well placed in the lower right third area of the frame. Well done. Aug 25th
25 Aug 17 Comment Hi Lona. I really like the composition of your image. To me, you could try to darken down the upper part of the legs to take some of the emphasis off the out-of-focus areas (unless you want to re-shoot it with a larger f-stop). Also having perfect focus on the pink ball leads my eyes directly there. Nice job. Aug 25th

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