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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 41 |
Nov 19 |
Reply |
Thanks so much Mark! |
Nov 16th |
| 41 |
Nov 19 |
Reply |
Thanks Henry! Blending modes and an overall texture at the end really help unify the composition. |
Nov 16th |
| 41 |
Nov 19 |
Reply |
Hah hah Brad! Actually, I had fun and found it energizing. 😉
Thanks!
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Nov 16th |
| 41 |
Nov 19 |
Reply |
Thank you Jan! |
Nov 16th |
| 41 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
Lisa, this is my very favorite piece you've submitted to this group!
It tells a story, whether you intended to or not. I see a warrior mask that is very compelling.
I like Brad's ideas about using this as a starting point to make a complete composition with a background that supports the mask. |
Nov 12th |
| 41 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
I love this Jan!!
To me, this doesn't feel cluttered or uncomfortable so I am the other perspective from Brad, lol!
I love the colors, the concept and the composition.
My only thought might be to take that string of tree lights and expand them to the entire photo so they look like bubbles coming up from the ocean floor.
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Nov 12th |
| 41 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
I, too, loved the doors in Barcelona and you really captured it with this collage!
My only suggestion might be to pick out three or five images of the graffiti that you really love and give them more real estate and pop. Have the others be back up players in the composition so that our eye has a place to rest and to explore. |
Nov 12th |
| 41 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
Henry, I love your composition and your colors! It's a colorful fun piece of art. Lovely work!
I agree with Brad that having an intersection between the two stems would help the flow of of the viewers eye.
I'd suggest that to take it a bit further, you redo the liquified piece to copy the curve of the sumac leaves in the background, like an echo. It would draw me further into your slippery world. |
Nov 12th |
| 41 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
Brad,
I like that you are pushing yourself to try new ideas and ways of approaching a creative photo!!
I first start by think of what my story might be. So although, I know you said you're inspired by this scene, I don't get the story as a viewer.
I wonder if perhaps simplifying the scene ... take out the clouds and Photo 2 and just blend photo one and three? How about putting his eyes in line with the bike riders so that it seems as if he's watching them? Then there might be a direct connection between the two photos and a better story.
Just random suggestions for you. This is your art so it should express your creativity. |
Nov 12th |
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