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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 18 |
Apr 17 |
Reply |
Would not fit me (or Stavinsky) :-) But I could see someone making one to fit a Barbie as Ballerina. If made like a short(ish) train to a wedding gown it would be effective with dance movements. |
Apr 17th |
| 18 |
Apr 17 |
Comment |
The focusing in on the eye, I find, works well, if a little dark. Maybe a crop vertically, leaving just the eye and horn, and maybe a line filter to bring out the edges (? PS poster edges) to really bring out the menace effect of eye and horn. |
Apr 6th |
| 18 |
Apr 17 |
Comment |
I very much like this, and find it has similarities to Meg's presentation, with the background layer the more manipulated aspect. It works for me because I like the overall patterns and colour of the background, and find it to complement well the deer in colour and actions. |
Apr 6th |
| 18 |
Apr 17 |
Comment |
Simple and effective. The inflorescence and butterfly left pretty much as photographed, but the recommended way off focus background has been adapted to produce a painterly filtered background. It is a reversal of the usual, with the subject as it, as its background the creative. Good original thinking.
I don't feel it needs lightening. Maybe the proof, or otherwise, might lie in a quick A4 print on plain paper.
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Apr 6th |
| 18 |
Apr 17 |
Comment |
It is a nice piece of art to choose for a creative. The thoughtful pose of the sculpure, and the link to clothing to address it leave scope for making it your own. The line effect is a good start that can be taken advantage of. I feel the background could be removed, leaving the sculpture and clothing to say it all. With a little more processing it would be really great. |
Apr 6th |
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4 comments - 1 reply for Group 18
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4 comments - 1 reply Total
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