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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 22 |
Jan 26 |
Comment |
I love the composition. You did an excellent job of arranging this. To me, the edges of the petals look overly saturated, almost crunchy and unnatural. |
Jan 13th |
| 22 |
Jan 26 |
Comment |
Great pose of the chimp. I would remove the straw as I think they're a distraction and don't add any story line to the image. Sometimes we have to remove a few pieces of debris from animals to make them more visually appealing. |
Jan 13th |
| 22 |
Jan 26 |
Comment |
Nicely composed image. The girl really serves as a focal point and anchor for the image. I disagree about the little spots. I don't think they add to the image. Plus they weren't reflected in your original composition. |
Jan 13th |
| 22 |
Jan 26 |
Comment |
Well done, Marti. Hope you didn't step on a rattlesnake out there in the desert! |
Jan 13th |
| 22 |
Jan 26 |
Comment |
Nice image. I like how it's set off-center. I agree with Marti that the whites on the lighthouse appear blown out. Also, it's probably my eyes, but the sky above the lighthouse appears to have a slight purple-ish tinge to it, especially when compared with the original. |
Jan 13th |
5 comments - 0 replies for Group 22
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| 71 |
Jan 26 |
Comment |
Excellent composition. I love the way the boats create a line that draws the eye into the image. The water, to me at least, has a slight turquoise tint. I've never been to the Canary Islands but the color seems a little off from my experience of seeing a bluer sky and water. |
Jan 13th |
| 71 |
Jan 26 |
Comment |
Wonderful image of another worldly place. I've never seen anything quite like it. (I don't go to the movies, so I've never seen Avatar!) I agree with Michele that you could improve it by darkening the upper left side as the extreme brightness draws the eye off the image and away from the rocks in the middle. Just a better balance of light would be quite helpful. |
Jan 6th |
| 71 |
Jan 26 |
Comment |
You captured an attractive geometric design. Wonderful processing. Very Ansel Adams of you. Just wondering if it would help tell the story better if you have a few pedestrians or cyclists. As it is, though, it's a very nice image and well captured. |
Jan 3rd |
| 71 |
Jan 26 |
Comment |
Terrific image and wonderful processing. I suggest you frame this one. Can't think of a way to improve it. Wish I'd taken it!! |
Jan 3rd |
| 71 |
Jan 26 |
Comment |
A beautiful image. I do think the cluster of trees on the point are a huge draw to the eye. To me, it doesn't serve them well to have them in the center of your photo. The rock in the lower right doesn't have much visual interest. So I suggest cropping the image just above the top of the rock in the water. This would remove some empty space at the bottom of the photo and move your nice eye-catching trees to a lower position. This would also help draw the eye into the distant horizon. |
Jan 3rd |
| 71 |
Jan 26 |
Comment |
I think this is a lovely composition and perfect balance, especially the way you've positioned the stairs leading to the green door. To me, it's quite clear what the focal point of your image is as well as the pretty surroundings that frame the door. Maybe it's my monitor, but it appears a bit dark. I'd like to see what it would look like if you increased the exposure by 1/3 to 1/2 on your processing. |
Jan 1st |
6 comments - 0 replies for Group 71
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11 comments - 0 replies Total
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