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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 34 |
Feb 22 |
Comment |
Very interesting image Brian. The cultural aspect is so nice. To take Steve's idea of the elders as spirits a little further, it might be cool to reduce their opacity a bit so they take on an ethereal quality. The blurry brown log in the very front is a bit distracting to my eye. I think if you eliminated it, there would be more attention on all the other important details. Well conceived and executed! |
Feb 23rd |
| 34 |
Feb 22 |
Comment |
Well this is fun Fran. I totally identify with you picking up the leaves and having them sit on your desk for awhile. Sometimes it just takes some mental percolating over time to figure out how to use something like that. You've done a fine job on all counts. I can almost hear their "wings" fluttering as they fly away. Nicely done! |
Feb 23rd |
| 34 |
Feb 22 |
Comment |
Nice edit Georgianne. The truck looks like a ghost figure to me, which fits nicely in the rest of the scene. I like the old-timey feel with the tiny bit of color on the left and right edges. Well processed image! |
Feb 20th |
| 34 |
Feb 22 |
Reply |
We will miss you Georgianne. But we will indeed hope for your successful recovery and return to Group 34! Sending a big hug. |
Feb 20th |
| 34 |
Feb 22 |
Reply |
You are absolutely correct Brian. I should have placed a border around the image. I originally posted it on Instagram and the background there is white, so I didn't need one. Thanks for the reminder and kind feedback. |
Feb 20th |
| 34 |
Feb 22 |
Comment |
I know you like placing main subjects very near the edges sometimes, but I agree with the other comments and don't feel the scene is as impactful as it could be because she doesn't catch the viewer's eye. It does look like a lovely place to have lunch, but the fact that the room is ready for diners but empty, does make me feel a loneliness factor. I do kind of like where Fran placed her. |
Feb 19th |
| 34 |
Feb 22 |
Comment |
Wow Steve. Love your gullpaper. And the finished piece is so creative. You did a great job of fitting the strutting gull's face onto the flying gull. His stare is piercing and makes the viewer notice his "attitude." The part that you did for Original 3 reminds me of a crab for some reason. To my eye it seems to compete a bit with the main gull; perhaps reducing the opacity a tad would soften it just a bit. I love the motion trail you applied -- it brings Jonathan eye-to-eye with the viewer. I can tell you had fun with this. Well done! |
Feb 19th |
5 comments - 2 replies for Group 34
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5 comments - 2 replies Total
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