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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 1 |
Jun 17 |
Reply |
Neal, I am planning to be there again tomorrow. I'll try to get a panorama with a normal lens. |
Jun 29th |
| 1 |
Jun 17 |
Comment |
I don't think colors add to the picture in this case. I also don't like the centered vertical. The foreground is too bright. Please see my version of it. |
Jun 18th |
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| 1 |
Jun 17 |
Comment |
Very interesting image. I would get rid of the bottom - there is no need to know where it is and the image looks great without it. Excellent capture! |
Jun 18th |
| 1 |
Jun 17 |
Comment |
This is my version of two bale and a house - see attached. I would also think about trying to make the rest less prominent. Maybe desaturating it or darkening. I haven't tried that but would think about it if that would be my image. |
Jun 18th |
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| 1 |
Jun 17 |
Comment |
For me, it's way too many subjects. My eyes jump from on thing to another. What's the story? For me the story is the knot. If the story is about the coil or the flag, they have to be displayed more prominently. Here is my version of the image - I think it's stronger, but it tells a different story than the maker had in mind, so it might not work from that point of view. |
Jun 18th |
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| 1 |
Jun 17 |
Comment |
For me, it's a little bit too much of everything. Either the fence is a subject or the barn, but not both. I would go for a barn and crop the bottom - see attached. I would love to see a bit more on the right, but not sure that it's been captured. With my cropping in mind, I would also try to move a few steps to the left or to the right not to have the fence starting in the middle. In terms of post processing - I see traces of it around the barn and below the fence. Now, having said all of that, it's still a very interesting image and it's good as is. The comments are just my subjective opinion.
Note: I've edited the screenshot copy of the image so there is a lot of posterization, but I just wanted to give an idea. |
Jun 18th |
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| 1 |
Jun 17 |
Comment |
Stunning capture. The bee is tech sharp. I would try to darken the background a bit. |
Jun 18th |
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