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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 35 |
Jul 23 |
Comment |
I like the total scene not only of the old clock but also for the American flag and flowers in front of the clock. My only suggestion is to crop the right to eliminate the old wooden pole and on the left to eliminate the trash can. For me the changes focuses my attention on the clock and flag/flowers. |
Jul 13th |
| 35 |
Jul 23 |
Comment |
The sculpture is so unusual it must have a purpose so the viewer knows what they are looking at. You did a good job converting from the original. One fascinating aspect is the shadow on the base that is created by the structure. I wonder how it changes during the day. |
Jul 13th |
| 35 |
Jul 23 |
Comment |
It is a good scene but a bit a bit too dark. Take off a little from the top then experiment with contrast to brighten the water in the foreground, the trees in the mid-ground and the beautiful clouds. The scene is worth spending time to work on it as all the elements are very good. |
Jul 13th |
| 35 |
Jul 23 |
Comment |
This is a different way of showing a tree and I like it. For me there is too much surrounding the tree even though it is more imposing than the slender trees around it. Perhaps burning the area of the tree that is in sunlight would make the tree stand out more than it does. |
Jul 13th |
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