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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 35 |
Mar 23 |
Comment |
The model, of course, makes the scene. It is fine the way you presented it and the eye goes immediately to her. You might slightly burn the edges, especially the foliage areas, to keep the eye focused on the model. (This goes back to my darkroom days when the teacher often suggested burning all the edges to make a "frame" for the center of interest." |
Mar 22nd |
| 35 |
Mar 23 |
Comment |
The simplicity of the scene makes it stand out. Including the reflection in the foreground really makes the image different and much more interesting. I suggest that you make the entire scene lighter and add some contrast so it doesn't have the drab appearance. However, the areas around the reflection should be burned in slightly to set off the refection. |
Mar 22nd |
| 35 |
Mar 23 |
Comment |
I like this scene very much as subjects like this attract me. My only suggestion is to slightly burn everything from the top to the tops of the small trees. This will direct the interest to the foreground, which in my opinion is more important than the rest of the scene. |
Mar 22nd |
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