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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 35 |
Nov 17 |
Comment |
The old barn has an appeal by itself. To me, the drawback are the two doors with the vivid white X's as they draw attention from the upper door that resembles a flag. It is that door that makes the barn stand out. If you were able to effectively eliminate the two X's it would make the picture more interesting. |
Nov 16th |
| 35 |
Nov 17 |
Comment |
The limb is a good framing device for the scene. All the steps that you used to achieve the pleasing color were worthwhile as that touch of color nicely sets off the foliage from the monuments. My only suggestion is to crop the left side to eliminate that monument in the shadow. |
Nov 16th |
| 35 |
Nov 17 |
Comment |
Your position was right on with the spire between the limbs of the tree. The composition was almost too tight, unless what was on either side did not add to the picture. The conversion was straight forward but to me it appears that the temple is leaning backwards and needs to be straightened. |
Nov 16th |
| 35 |
Nov 17 |
Comment |
You put a lot of work in creating this one and the result is a high impact image. It is clever and jumps out. My only comment is that I wish you had more space at both ends of the row. It would make them stand out even more than they do. |
Nov 16th |
| 35 |
Nov 17 |
Comment |
This is almost surreal as the bushes are sculpted in such an unusual way. They are so different that the building and tree bring reality into the scene. I like the composition with the sculptures in the foreground that attract the attention and the building and tree in the background to compliment the foliage. |
Nov 16th |
| 35 |
Nov 17 |
Comment |
My feeling at first look was: There should be another barn in the gap between the trees on the right. Since that isn't possible crop the picture to eliminate the gap. It then makes the barns more important (to me anyway). Also by not making the foliage a bright white there is a "softness" to the entire scene which makes it more appealing. |
Nov 16th |
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