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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 58 |
Sep 23 |
Reply |
Hi Pinaki.. I think the bold colors of red and blue caught my eye at first, but then the clean background isolating the subject and his honest demeanor probably made me "click". |
Sep 23rd |
| 58 |
Sep 23 |
Reply |
I believe that using the "perspective warp" tool in PS would help straighten the columns. |
Sep 23rd |
| 58 |
Sep 23 |
Reply |
Hi Pinaki.. to me, if the mirror were cropped out would also mean that the yellow building in the background would be amputated which provides context (environment) to the story. Perhaps Isaac can share his vision. |
Sep 23rd |
| 58 |
Sep 23 |
Comment |
Great image, Isaac. Thanks for your explanation. You caught the subject's skin tones correctly and I like the gesture of his hand which mimic the corn cobs. The touches of yellow of the bus, corn and building serves to tie the image together. I might have cropped the left of the bus to make this a vertical as a suggestion. |
Sep 21st |
| 58 |
Sep 23 |
Comment |
Sally, colorful image of the kids and adults enjoying themselves. I like the geometry of the circles (bubbles) and the verticals of the flags. I like Ed's version and crop; with the horizon on the thirds makes for better composition. Side lighting and shadows add depth to the image. |
Sep 21st |
| 58 |
Sep 23 |
Comment |
Pinaki, it's gonna be a long day for the sad clown if he's there at 7 am. I like the long perspective of the pillars of the building to the right. The man's gesture to his friends aid to take the viewer's eye to the back of the image. Sufficient blur at f/5 to keep the background slightly out of focus. It appears to be two subjects in the image and little interaction. Perhaps waiting for an appropriate moment to see if there is a recognition between the two would add to the story. |
Sep 21st |
| 58 |
Sep 23 |
Comment |
Bruce - lovely image and shows the beauty of aging gracefully. I like how her hands touch her face and the framing of the cowl around her head. I also like the unmanicured nails showing her background as a hard worker. I would leave the vegetables around in the foreground because its part of the environment and adds to the story. The red color noise throughout the image is an easy fix in using color denoise option. |
Sep 21st |
| 58 |
Sep 23 |
Comment |
Ed, great image and rich with tones of black & white. You caught a moment of action with their uplifted feet. I like the diagonal rail on the left providing a leading line to the couple. The interesting textures of foliage and contrast of smooth boardwalk keeps the viewer's eye around the image. The light colored bench is a distraction and perhaps burning to darken it or remove it altogether by cropping is a suggestion. |
Sep 21st |
| 58 |
Sep 23 |
Comment |
Kathleen, great image and explanation how the image was captured. I like how the rider is entering the scene from the diagonal and all the people waiting in traffic. Your decision to convert to monochrome and remove the distraction of color is a good one. The subject is dead center and my suggestion would be to crop a bit from the right of the frame to make him on the thirds to improve the composition. |
Sep 21st |
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6 comments - 3 replies Total
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