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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 8 |
Nov 19 |
Reply |
Thanks for the feedback Isaac.. all makeup!!! only sharpened the eyes. |
Nov 19th |
| 8 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
Eye popping to say the least. The leading lines of the stair rails and the steps take you right to his eyes. Good conversion to B&W with a wide range of tones. Nice crop and clean exit points - Good eye, Marcus. |
Nov 17th |
| 8 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
Snehendu… thanks for including both versions. I actually prefer the original (the larger one) for its crispness and stark cloudless sky. The "temple" is prominently on the thirds and the center of interest. To me, the blurred foreground acts as a visual barrier, although perhaps not as you remembered the scene. |
Nov 17th |
| 8 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
Mark, agree with the others about the geometry of the image. The silhouette of the bird adds "life" to the image, and your conversion to monochrome is a good idea. |
Nov 17th |
| 8 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
The background reflections add other people to this street scene as secondary characters. Nice side light casting shadows on the sidewalk and interesting textures throughout. Clean crop which focuses on the subjects. A sense of story as the viewer wonders what the conversation is about and what the girl in black is looking at. |
Nov 17th |
| 8 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
Interesting perspective of an architectural subject and framed within an interesting window. The text superimposed on the building gives the viewer a sense of place and the image is balanced with the top and bottom elements. The image appears to be symmetrical but yet is not, because of the mismatched left and right bottom corners which affects the composition. As Mark mentioned, you did a lot of work on the image and creatively flipped the text in post which is a good idea. |
Nov 17th |
5 comments - 1 reply for Group 8
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| 58 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
Daniel, I agree with the others comments, but I like that there is a group of three in the image. I like the touches of pink in the necklace, the woman's blouse, and the girl's bow which move your eye around the girl and her expression. I get a sense of mystery of the others in the frame and wonder about the conversation between the adults. |
Nov 17th |
| 58 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
Jim, I also like the B& W version for all the reasons the others have mentioned. This is almost like a picture within a picture- with the conductor in his own framed window space, surrounded by the elements of time. Good job! |
Nov 17th |
| 58 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
Lauren, Great moment in time and place - the man's expression coupled with the pigeon ready for take-off. Love the back lighting on his head. Curious to know if you intentionally left the sunburst on the right building as the source of light? |
Nov 17th |
| 58 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
Well done Hassan!..The others have all added comments that have said it all. I love that the bicycle shadow is in its own space and links all the other elements in the image. |
Nov 17th |
| 58 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
Isaac, bathroom chaos, yet you were able to organize the elements to provide the viewer with a well defined subject within a circular frame. Lipsticks all point to the lady who is in focus. Difficult conditions for the photographer, and I also like the blank wall behind the lady which provides a resting place for the eye. |
Nov 17th |
5 comments - 0 replies for Group 58
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10 comments - 1 reply Total
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