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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 7 |
Apr 17 |
Comment |
I have a problem finding something to focus on. The fries are not attractive and seem a little out of focus. Perhaps it would have been better to make it about the people without such emphasis on the fries. The umbrellas, the people and the location make an excellent subject. |
Apr 14th |
| 7 |
Apr 17 |
Comment |
Beautiful colors and composition. My only problem is the lone flower upper right which seems out of place and distracting. Maybe you should consider eliminating all the blurred flowers and have a completely black background. |
Apr 14th |
| 7 |
Apr 17 |
Comment |
Nice shot, probably a quick capture. Unfortunately, as a result, it seems a bit soft. |
Apr 14th |
| 7 |
Apr 17 |
Comment |
Nice shot! I can see what you want to do but I also have problems with that. Barbara seems to have it down. I would follow her instructions. I think I would also try to bring out more detail in the body of the bird. It seems to be a bit blown out. Work on it some more. It has great potential. |
Apr 14th |
| 7 |
Apr 17 |
Comment |
I think the problem here is that you're up too close. This cut out the mast which creates problems. If you crop as Barbara suggests then you have a wire to the bow coming out of nowhere and not enough of the boat to tell the story. It could also use some more contrast and vibrance to give it more life. |
Apr 14th |
5 comments - 0 replies for Group 7
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| 33 |
Apr 17 |
Comment |
Eye catching shot. Two suggestions--Crop half the sky to move the structure up from the center and make it more prominent. And then straighten the lines of the structure. The building is a bit distorted. |
Apr 14th |
| 33 |
Apr 17 |
Comment |
Great shot. My only suggestion would be to make the dark areas very slightly lighter and make the very bright section in the middle a bit less brilliant. I'm sure that was how it was but it seems distracting. Beautiful. |
Apr 14th |
2 comments - 0 replies for Group 33
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7 comments - 0 replies Total
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