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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 54 |
Feb 19 |
Reply |
Thanks, Aavo. And maybe if I made it a touch less bright. |
Feb 27th |
| 54 |
Feb 19 |
Reply |
I like the way you think, Alan. I agree, that would have worked better. Maybe with the addition of a third object...? Hmmm.
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Feb 27th |
| 54 |
Feb 19 |
Reply |
Excellent suggestion! I was having a hard time trying to think of what it was missing, and was thinking only what I could add visually. Your suggestion of thinking about her story probably would have been a better approach. Now I've got several ideas. |
Feb 27th |
| 54 |
Feb 19 |
Comment |
Such an interesting image from such simple beginnings!
I am impressed as always, Alan, with how you introduce fragments of shapes at the edges of your images that enhance rather than detract. In this case, it's the doorway at the left. After years of critiques reiterating eliminating anything that draws the eye away from the main subject, it is illuminating to see how your peripheral additions provide an essential touch of tension that takes the image to the next level.
My only suggestion would have been exactly what Aavo said. I really like your revision. |
Feb 27th |
| 54 |
Feb 19 |
Comment |
Great image!
I love the colors, including the color you gave her face. She fits right in. So clever of you to use the squashes this way!
This reminds me of images I saw in Hawaii years ago, but with a more colorful and modern touch. There is something very fresh about this image.
I agree with Brad that a bit of a crop on the right might be interesting. |
Feb 27th |
| 54 |
Feb 19 |
Comment |
Great image, Aavo! It really gives me the feeling of action I've seen at skateboard parks (including the falling down!) The roof is a fabulous shape, and I really like your composition. I especially like the light on the fellow on the right, which gives him equal weight despite being smaller.
I don't have any suggestions to add to those above. |
Feb 27th |
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