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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 54 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
Great suggestion! I included that in my revision above. |
Aug 14th |
| 54 |
Aug 18 |
Reply |
Thank you!
I like your suggestions about the flowers in front. I brought them in with a little more detail as well as less bright. |
Aug 14th |
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| 54 |
Aug 18 |
Reply |
For what it's worth, this was the image I meant to attach. In retrospect, perhaps a bit smaller would be better... I see what you mean, it is tricky. |
Aug 14th |
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| 54 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
I love this image!
For me, the blur on the cow and the petals is spot on; it fits in perfectly with the motion of the air and feels a bit dreamy as well.
I love the way the cow's ear mimics the flower petal.
I like the way you diminished the flower petals as they near the edge of the image.
My only suggestion is to consider increasing the size and brightness of your son's face to make sure it catches the viewer's eye right away. |
Aug 10th |
| 54 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
Great image, Alan!
I think the ladies really reflect the energy and intensity of the music. I love the spacing and the line. I originally thought that they should diminish in size a little faster, but after trying that out I like your version more.
The dancing piano is a very nice touch, as is the uneven pants legs of the balancing violinist.
Very well done!
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Aug 10th |
| 54 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
I thought that the girl was farther away, so her size made sense. I assumed the others were fooling around in the foreground and then she jumped in the background.
I like Brad's idea a lot.
Thank you Betty, for such a fun summer image! |
Aug 10th |
| 54 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
I love the texture and the composition. Your four bright spots, two at the top and two at the bottom, add a very interesting balance in an unexpected way. The colors are marvelous.
The second stem is boldly bright and prominent. It gives a sort of 3D effect. I can see that it is a key part of this image; it takes it from being an interpretation of flowers into something else. Something just a little haunting to me, that keeps me coming back to look again. I think it transforms this from a soft pretty image into a compelling one. |
Aug 10th |
| 54 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
I really feel the spirit of Monet in this image.
Great composition. I think the young ladies add to the balance.
Personally, I really like the pink; for me, it adds just the right splash of color in the right place. The sunglasses feel to me like a wink and a nod to say this is a modern tribute rather than a reproduction.
I personally reduce opacity of filters on faces, but that's my own preference.
I might have tried a color shift from red to more of an orange on the face of the girl in pink , or perhaps lightened the exposure on her face before applying the filter.
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Aug 10th |
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