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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 54 |
Feb 18 |
Comment |
Such a lovely image!
I love the softness and the textures. The music is very very subtle, personally, I think it works well that way.
I think the bright spot in the upper corner not only balances the composition, but also is in harmony with the lighting on the bird.
I agree with Alan about the bug part on the beak.
On the other hand, I thought the birds in the distance were a very nice touch, because the bird on the branch seems to be looking at them. It adds a bit of poignancy for me. I thought it was a subtle touch, like the music as texture.
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Feb 17th |
| 54 |
Feb 18 |
Reply |
I'm curious, Phill, do you feel there are too many elements because they appear to be unrelated? |
Feb 17th |
| 54 |
Feb 18 |
Comment |
A very impressive image, Alan!
I love the clarity of the scene, its realism emphasizing the strangeness of each element.
Great composition, with the arc of elements going from the juggler with one ball down to the takeout box. Beautiful job of perspective and integrating everything.
A very artistic image! |
Feb 17th |
| 54 |
Feb 18 |
Comment |
Poor fellow, he never had a chance!
He looks very much at home there among the cacti. The birds somehow look much more sinister in your image than in the original.
I love the composition of the cacti. It's so well arranged that it does not give a lot of options for inserting the skeleton, and yet you made the skeleton look like he belongs there. You captured the background at just the right angle.
Masterly job of selections and integrating, as always.
I don't have any suggestions to add to the rest of the group's comments.
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Feb 17th |
| 54 |
Feb 18 |
Comment |
Remarkable!
I love the swirly lines and the rainbow of color in the background. For me, they emphasize the stillness and sweetness of the baby.
I do a lot of baby pictures and have never seen or thought of one like this. You have remarkable vision, Phill!
Personally, I would consider a little lighter exposure on the baby's face. The white outfit and the yellow on the left are so much brighter that they keep winning out.
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Feb 17th |
| 54 |
Feb 18 |
Comment |
Great image, Aavo!
It's so strong and visually simple (although I fully appreciate what you say about it taking more time than one might think!).
I love the composition and the colors. The various positions of the people are intriguing. The floor they are standing on is great.
When I zoom in, the outline of the people looks great because it looks like the light wrapping around from the front. But zoomed out, all I see is the unevenness. So, as always, there's something to be said on both sides.
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Feb 17th |
5 comments - 1 reply for Group 54
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| 61 |
Feb 18 |
Comment |
Very nice, Salvador! It makes me smile.
Great composition. I really like the background, with the picture frames forming a diagonal that echos her stretchy top. Her expression is perfect with the gesture of the stretching.
This is a very creative composition, and I like it very much! |
Feb 17th |
| 61 |
Feb 18 |
Comment |
Lovely model, great pose.
I like your light for the most part; it's just a bit bright under her arm. I really like the highlight on her left cheekbone.
The chair is the same color as her hair- nice touch!
The background is distracting to my eye. I would consider something different, perhaps something along the lines of the very rough example below.
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Feb 17th |
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| 61 |
Feb 18 |
Comment |
I love your model and her pose. Great lighting!
Her hair looks great.
25 layers! Wow! Wonderful job of putting them together, they look very coherent.
I really like the fog, but I personally would have had less opacity down by her feet. She has such graceful feet |
Feb 17th |
| 61 |
Feb 18 |
Comment |
I like this in b&w very much.
Great light on his face, and I really like how the curve of the hat brings my eye back to his face.
How interesting to go back and rework an image from the past.
His shirt is very bright and so a little distracting. |
Feb 17th |
| 61 |
Feb 18 |
Reply |
Thank you for your feedback.
I agree cropping in would be a good idea. I do like how dark it goes around the edges. I might try playing with a bit of vignette. |
Feb 17th |
4 comments - 1 reply for Group 61
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9 comments - 2 replies Total
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