Activity for User 598 - Albert Zabin - ajzabin@gmail.com

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27 Aug 25 Comment The strong diagonals, verticals and 3D round objects make this a very sstrong photo. Thetwo objects lower on the left I think make the picture a bit too busy. I would try erasing them Aug 13th
27 Aug 25 Comment I'm not sure the leaves add much. Beautfully done Aug 13th
27 Aug 25 Comment Beautifully executed.. I might darken the background a bit Aug 13th
27 Aug 25 Comment Very impressive. I would up the contrast by darkening the dark areas and see how *if) you like the idea
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27 Aug 25 Comment This is a really interesting photograph. What I realy like is that you got so many unrelated details, but still kept a very solid composition that fit them all Aug 13th
27 Aug 25 Comment Zoo pictures are tough. I think you did a great job. It doesn't look like a zoo picture and the colors are real. I could crop a little to cat the animal off center. I think you could remve some of the bottom Aug 13th
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47 Aug 25 Comment Really beautifully executed. I think the child's face lacks expression. I don't know what a cyborg looks like after it is captured or has removed its cicuit board, but I think a model should have some expression Aug 13th
47 Aug 25 Comment This is a spectacular image. The composition creates a dynamic swirl of curves Find a good wall for it. Aug 13th
47 Aug 25 Comment I think this is a very strong photograph The tonal balance is really good and covers all 10 zones. The composition iThe face of theman on the bottom looks too much like a deer or other animal. I don't know how to fix the face issue, but perhaps if you darken the area (and blur a bit) you could cure the face problem Aug 13th
47 Aug 25 Comment I agree with Jeff's comments, but Ithink thehighllights shoud be brought down. Sun's rays coming at diagonals makes the phot very dyinamic, but I think cropping of the foregrounds would help. Ialso would experiment with darkening the whle photo to give lighting more compatible. Keep playing with it,; I think you hae the potential of a really fine pnotograph with late afternoon or early evening Aug 13th
47 Aug 25 Comment The photograph is technically well done, but I do not find it interesting. I think one of Kirsti's comments identifies a weakness of the photo. "It could be an opening scene in a movie, and I cannot wait to see what happens next." I think that one of the most difficult photographs to make is one of someone else's art that is more than just a catalog picture Is there something in the environment (for example)that would tell a story or ask a question? For example if the road were a super highway in an urban area, a a viewer , looking at the sign might ask what was this road like when the sign was put up? If the sign were in an area with lots ofruins, dilapidated buildings the sign might stand for permanence. I think it might be worthwhile totake more pictures with the sign, rather than just of the sign Aug 13th
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