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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 47 |
May 23 |
Comment |
I think the composition of the original tells your story better because it gives the location some life and identifies that the buildings are part of a place. |
May 31st |
| 47 |
May 23 |
Comment |
If it were mine, I would only tone down the bright area of the sky.. I wouldnt touch anything else. |
May 31st |
| 47 |
May 23 |
Comment |
I really like the image. I would prefer a pure brown tone rather than the yellow brown of sepia. That's just my preference. I think Kirsti's modification of the vignette helps the mood you created |
May 31st |
| 47 |
May 23 |
Comment |
I do like the composition. The flock is not flying out of the frame ,bu comingin. The composition implies the flock is even larger and I think it makes the picture more dynamic than the origional. I think the birds would beneft by bring the tone down slightly |
May 31st |
| 47 |
May 23 |
Comment |
Thanks everyone. This is a very challenging scene to photograph. It has many great elements, but I foound it very difficult to balance them. Your comments are very helpfiul |
May 15th |
| 47 |
May 23 |
Comment |
I think you are right
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May 11th |
6 comments - 0 replies for Group 47
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| 53 |
May 23 |
Comment |
Is there any detail in the sky that could be brought out? |
May 31st |
| 53 |
May 23 |
Comment |
Miriam''s edits do improe a lovely photograph. Iwould darken the bright backs of the sheep andto the same with the house roof in center background or clone it out. |
May 31st |
| 53 |
May 23 |
Comment |
The treatment of the sky really ruins an otherwise lovely photograph. I also feel that the left portion is too saturated and distracting. I prefer Tom' crop over toning down the colors |
May 31st |
| 53 |
May 23 |
Comment |
The composition is excellent. Try darkening and increase the color intensity. Then brighten, and crease contrast on the dark foliage in the mid and front areas. Heighten color in those areas |
May 31st |
| 53 |
May 23 |
Comment |
I like the humour. I agree with Tom's suggestion |
May 31st |
| 53 |
May 23 |
Comment |
Two on the diagonal works. I think the backgrounds should be blurred and darkened. The top flower looks wahed out on my screen |
May 31st |
| 53 |
May 23 |
Comment |
An improvement. Thanks |
May 9th |
7 comments - 0 replies for Group 53
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13 comments - 0 replies Total
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