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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 47 |
Mar 22 |
Comment |
It's only my opinion, but I think the composition holds together better The lines on the floor now reinforce the lines of the walls. the line nearest the foreground ai at an angle just enough tokep the composition fron being too static. |
Mar 17th |
| 47 |
Mar 22 |
Comment |
Really a creative shot. I think the repeating lines and shapes make this a powerful abstract photograph. I would crop the top to eliminate the horizontal lines, which are not quite at right angles to he horizontal lines. Technically the photograph is just right.
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Mar 15th |
| 47 |
Mar 22 |
Comment |
There is much in this photograph that is really interesting, but I agree with Kirsti that the view needs to be calmed and the triangle needs de-emphasis. If this were my picture I would ask what is the photo about? Is it the people or is it the architecture of this subterranean plaza? I think it is the people. I feel that there is too much going on-- too many angles. The lines of the tile in the foreground is not quite horizontal but not very angular. Try cropping the bottom ust to the group of people and then crop on the right to eliminate the part of the foreground floor that the bottom crop does not remove. I would like more contrast, This is a picture worth working on. |
Mar 15th |
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