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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 24 |
Jan 22 |
Reply |
Thanks everyone for your helpful suggstions |
Jan 25th |
| 24 |
Jan 22 |
Comment |
This is a wonderful photo. The birds add a nice touch. They are almost an implied leading line to the couple. I might have cropped the bottom to below the their hands to show more emotion and the preganancy. |
Jan 24th |
| 24 |
Jan 22 |
Comment |
I agree with Jim and Tam. I prefer Tam's composition because of the color enhancement of the butterfly, but something would have to be done to the shadow behind the butterfly. You did a great job in making the buterfly really sharp. The pi |
Jan 11th |
| 24 |
Jan 22 |
Comment |
Gorgeous colors. The lines of the shadows, the pier and the sky make this a work of art and not just one of thousands of this place. The clash of diagonal lines gives a sense of movement- just wonderful The only element I find a bit disturbing is the sun star. It is bright attention grabbing and to my eye doesn't fit well with the wonderful composition. I don't know how it could have been handled differently other than to have used a wider aperture, which would have reduced sharpness at some focal plance. |
Jan 11th |
| 24 |
Jan 22 |
Comment |
This is a beautiful photograph. I rather like the highlightsthat define the curves of the head. I think they aid the composition and provide a bit of contrast.I might crop thedark element (the neck). The real point of interest seems to me the curves,especially at the end. The curves give a the photogdraph dynamism and the dark element is like a badrrier. |
Jan 11th |
| 24 |
Jan 22 |
Comment |
WOW! This is creative and technically excellent, except for the streaks (commented by others)and a few tiny black spots in the lower right corner. You might try to lighten the black ledge on the right. I feel that an element as large as that can be a visual barrier when it is black. Just a suggestion oftexture and color might work. |
Jan 11th |
| 24 |
Jan 22 |
Comment |
photo of a difficult subject and made under difficult pressures. Technically I think this is perfect, I think removing the pales and hay, might improve the picture |
Jan 11th |
| 24 |
Jan 22 |
Comment |
Yes I think so. Thank you for taking an interest in my photo |
Jan 9th |
| 24 |
Jan 22 |
Comment |
Thank you for the edit. I thin it is a bit tight, An maybve a bit centerweighted |
Jan 7th |
8 comments - 1 reply for Group 24
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| 47 |
Jan 22 |
Comment |
I think you are both right about the crop. I was a bit sloppy. Would it help if I lightened the shadow? I'll try it.
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Jan 21st |
1 comment - 0 replies for Group 47
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9 comments - 1 reply Total
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