Activity for User 598 - Albert Zabin - ajzabin@gmail.com

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26 Oct 19 Comment There is a bit too much in the picture. The story is about the pumpkin and the flowers. I would try cropping severely on the left and bottom and just enough on the op to make a square format, which should reduce unneeded details on the top. The remaining rail becomes a border that keeps the eye to the subject. As it is now the rail leading line to nothing in particular. The color and texture is just great and in my opinion is all you need for a really engagin photograph Oct 14th
26 Oct 19 Comment Great eye. I find the dark woodwork along the bottom and top edges unnecessary and a bit too distracting. Oct 14th
26 Oct 19 Comment I would try eliminating the road by cropping the bottom and replacing the residue of the plants with a clone or erase tool. The the road remaining provides a strong leading line to the mountains and the colorful meadow and background. I don't think the plants are so beautiful that they add anything. The powerful elements are the color of the meadows, the contrasting dark vineyards, the streak of colr on the distant redge and , of course the gorgeous sky Oct 14th
26 Oct 19 Comment I love this photograph. All t he leading lines work together to carry the view to the horizon. The blue of the sky seems untrue to me.I would try darjening the blue ad adjusting the saturation. It seems to me to be too light and over saturated at the same time. Bob's suggestion to increase contrast might do the trick Oct 14th
26 Oct 19 Comment Perhaps cropping on the right to make a square format with a more intimate portrait. The frog is jujst wonderfully rendered and nothing else really adds to it Oct 14th
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47 Oct 19 Reply This was my intent. Oct 19th
47 Oct 19 Comment I think this is a great shot, Jen. Iwould crop a bit from the right and the opt. Less may be more and give you a little more abstraction, but possibly not a better photograph. Oct 14th
47 Oct 19 Comment I really like IR and although I do't understand your processing, the picture shows you know what you are ding. I would brighten the high lights in the background leaves. If you have any picture below the bottom I would give the bushes a lttle more rom Oct 14th
47 Oct 19 Comment This is a wonderful picture. I agree with you that a bit more contrast is called for. Then frameit and hang it Oct 14th
47 Oct 19 Comment I agree with Jack except I do not think the color version works well at all. I think you can make small adjust ments until you get a little more definition. I would start by deepening the shadows. Then I would lighten the light areas on the church and vegetation.just about a half stop. Silver EFEX lets you make very local changes. It's a trial and error process. Patience Oct 14th
47 Oct 19 Comment Good street photo. The obvious enthusiasm and complete lack of coordination of the dancers, made me smile. Technically the picture is really good. I would clone o ut the triangular shadow on the left and the plant on the right. Oct 14th
47 Oct 19 Comment Jack, this is quite beautiful. I might just drop down from the top right hand corner to the beginning of the light on the wood Oct 14th
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