Activity for User 598 - Albert Zabin - ajzabin@gmail.com

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26 Aug 19 Comment Beautifully done. I would tone down the clouds. I think they are much better than just a clack sky, but they do compete with the city. Aug 11th
26 Aug 19 Comment I love the magical quality of the image. One small point--the added last rock on the left takes my eye away from the composition. I would move it perhaps light to the left of the rock below to give you an implied leading line to the flowers Aug 11th
26 Aug 19 Comment I really like IR. This is in my opinion very well done, particularly in the version with the toned down high lights.
I would try a tighter crop of the left and the bottom		 Aug 11th
26 Aug 19 Comment Dave, I like your changes. I agree that the greenery need to be enhanced/ Summer shots are a challenge with all the green. Perhaps darkening and saturating the leaves would help. Aug 11th
26 Aug 19 Comment Pretty exciting! Another approach might be to use a square format and a white vignette. A diffrent pattern that would be less bold on the leaess might get more attention to the wild medusa like center. Aug 11th
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47 Aug 19 Comment The tones are fine. Most of the structure appear to me to be in zones 4-6 There are many pictures here. For example the area around what seems to be the control house could be separated out. The counter weights with the shadow are another subject. I think the sky is a problem because it seems fairly bright and occupies a lot of area. Perhaps if the darker areas in the sky were darkened a bit more, the photograph could be improved. I think the tree in the foregroundd could be cloned out and wouldn't be missed As is it is very interesting Aug 6th
47 Aug 19 Comment I think this abstract with strsightlines and curves is dynamic I would colne out the twig. No need of any reality here, Aug 6th
47 Aug 19 Comment Good composition with the wings creating conflicting diagonal lines. It looks as if this bird is about fly. Probably a little more room above the sings would be good esp. if you ever want to mat or frame this Aug 6th
47 Aug 19 Comment I really like the repitition of lines and the overall sharpness. I agree with Adrian's crop. The extra piipe really is not part of the interest. The trouble I have with Adrian's flip is that the beam that gives a nice leading line is pushed to the background. I might try brightening that beam just a half stop. I would also brighten the sunlit zones a little as well. Aug 6th
47 Aug 19 Comment I agree with Adrian's flip. For my taste there is too much in the picture I would crop out the courtyard. It weakens the strong class of angles and lines in my opinion. The tonality is good but you might try increasing contrast a bit and see how that fits iwth your vision Aug 6th
47 Aug 19 Comment First welcome. I looked at your zebra photo and your weaver bird. The zebra photo is really striking. When I first saw the original my immediate thought was your composition was really creative and gives the viewer a lion's eye view of the zebra that illustrates the confusion the zebras on the run create with their stripes fling by.

You handled the young engineer beautifully. The detail that you enhanced gives the portrait almost a tactile immediacy and enhances the expressiveness. The elimination of the colors in the background helps the photograph. You captured a full range of zones. Nicely done

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