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26 Jun 19 Comment If you bring down the flower ever so slightly it might eliminate the little bit of zone 10. I would crop most of the left side and make it a square composition. The flower is beautifully done and the detail of the pistels and stamens would make it a very nice and interesting flower picture. You might experiment with negative clarity just to soften the contrast Jun 17th
26 Jun 19 Comment I think the window should be the center of interest. I think it is interesting but totally swamped by the green wall Try cropping some or almost all the green away. I think the image is worth working. Jun 17th
26 Jun 19 Comment Beautiful. No gray dot on my screen. The big cloud on the left seems to have the faint band of orange. You might try enhancing that band very sbltly. Frame it well and hang it. Jun 17th
26 Jun 19 Comment I agree with the others' comments about the color. I feel that there is too much I would crop the left side and take out the near tree. I would also crop out the sky or increase the saturation of the blue and get some detail in the cloud if possible. Jun 17th
26 Jun 19 Comment Wonderful sense of movement with all the interconnected curves. I love the tonal balance. I find the bright line of the leaf on the right visually puzzling and I would crop the right side to take that line ut Jun 17th
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47 Jun 19 Comment I agree that tthis wonderful phot would be improved by cropping some at the bottom. The tall grass does provide a subtle leading line that cropping might enhance Jun 6th
47 Jun 19 Comment Wonderful photograph! I would consider cropping on the left about half the distance between the left edge and the distant mountain Jun 6th
47 Jun 19 Comment Wonderful photograph! I would consider cropping on the left about half the distance between the left edge and the distant mountain Jun 6th
47 Jun 19 Comment This is a picture I wish I had taken. The only suggestion I have would be to try lightening the foreground mountain by the equivalent of a half stop or less just to enhance the depth of distance. Jun 6th
47 Jun 19 Comment I like the how you captured the very tired face that is reinforced by the lack of any tension in his grip of the sword. I would try try even more brown tone and see if that enhances the mood. I think we tend to worry excessively about noise. The photo suggests that his face had more or more prominent wrinkles, and is that a scar on the left side of his mout? Perhaps a little more contrast would be good Jun 6th
47 Jun 19 Comment I think this is a very interesting image. The cluster of twigs almost copies the larger stalks. The sand pattern of dark sand however takes my eye. Out of the picture and the ripple marks fight to keep me in it seems to me that there are two pictures here. I think your question about lightening the sand perhaps comes from the complexity of the composition. I think lightening the sand and reducing the contrast in the sand would simplify the composition as would cropping on the left. Softening the focus of sand in the background. Might. Help. Jun 6th
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