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26 Jul 18 Comment The composition is really nice. I think the problem is that in B&W the sky is not interesting. In Silver EFEX you might try using the orange or red filter to create some contrast or shading, lightening the orange and darkening the blue.



















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47 Jul 18 Comment I fully agree with Sharon and your update hits me as just right. I think the trouble with the highlights being so bright is that they detract from the sad story the photograph is trying to tell. Jul 18th
47 Jul 18 Comment This photo reminds me of the Bruegel (spelling?) that are crammed full of people in a seemingly disorganized composition. I really respond to the details, which are held together by the repetition of lines running front to back and diagonal to the right. I do think that the out of focus circular bowl and round barrel on the lower left in the foreground are distracting. I would crop them.
the toneal variations and balance are excellent		 Jul 18th
47 Jul 18 Comment I like this kind of landscape and this is nicely compsed--I hope you weren't driving. A well regarded Norwegian photographer, I met on my Norway trip suggested stsrongy that leading lines are more powerful if they do not originate in the corners. I had never heard that before but after reviewing a whole lot of my pictures, I came to agree with him. So I woud crop a bit off the bottom to get the leading line of the road side grass out of the right hand bottom corner. I might darken the light areas of the sky. Jul 18th
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