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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 47 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
beautiful. I would increase contrast. I I think if there were more black areas that were really black, zone 2 or three there would be a bit more interest and the white of the boat would stand out without being actually whiter. I agree about the hot spot on the hull Also I would brighten the house so it would be more of a visual balancer.The composition fits and makes the mood. The boat essentially in the center;, but off enough so it is not static, but peaceful |
Jun 14th |
| 47 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
This is beautiful. The tonal balance is perfect to my eye. There is more in here.trim away everything but the pistels and some of the inner petals |
Jun 14th |
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| 47 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
I think it might have been better to have included the whol car rather than cutting them off at the wheels The bdranches and the other object in the top left are more distracting to me. These triumphal arches are tough to photograph. I hae a few of the Brandnburg gate in Berlin. I think they are pretty unsatisfactory |
Jun 12th |
| 47 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
technically,it is done very well. I agree with Ed that the shadow is distracting. Flipping the picture does keep my eye in the picture because we are sed to reading left to right. An Arab or Israeli might have an opposite sense. The problem, I think is that the shadow seems to be an unrelated object. Perhaps if the camera had been moved so that the shadow was more diagonal it would lead the eye to the clump. If it were my phot I would crop alot on all sides |
Jun 12th |
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