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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 26 |
Oct 17 |
Comment |
Great colt and the festive mood is well captured. But lt lacks a center of interest. As one of my teachers would say "what is the subjec? I suggest you crop the bottom to the firs table. The little group in green would give a center of iterest |
Oct 18th |
| 26 |
Oct 17 |
Comment |
I would crop out the left structure and horizon at bar. I would enhance the details for more of a tactile look
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Oct 16th |
| 26 |
Oct 17 |
Comment |
I fully Agee with Bob and Jose. I might bring the highlights just a bit. Maybe not |
Oct 16th |
| 26 |
Oct 17 |
Comment |
Good dynamic composition. Just lighten the black area res so there is some suggestion of texture |
Oct 16th |
| 26 |
Oct 17 |
Comment |
Good dynamic composition. Just lighten the black area res so there is some suggestion of texture |
Oct 16th |
| 26 |
Oct 17 |
Comment |
This very creative The balance of light and dark realll works. The foreground shoe Lhasa enough curves and diagonal lines to give a sense of movement The slightly soft focus of the back shoe is not a problem. It enhances the sharpness of the foreground show |
Oct 16th |
6 comments - 0 replies for Group 26
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| 47 |
Oct 17 |
Comment |
Beautiful balance greys and e xcept for the sky beautiful composition. I would ALS crops bit of dead space in the foreground the cropping will have the effect of bringing the model and shadowed dun closer. The composition would them have more impact
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Oct 18th |
| 47 |
Oct 17 |
Comment |
All good things come to them who sit and wait. My only suggestion is to crop to a square format and center the moon. Leave enough black to brighten the moon by contrast |
Oct 18th |
| 47 |
Oct 17 |
Comment |
I love the subject and the wonderful detail in the tonal balance Is really good. I would Crop the tall building on the left just past the cars
I m not sure if I wouldn't clone out the man with the nike |
Oct 18th |
3 comments - 0 replies for Group 47
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9 comments - 0 replies Total
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