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26 Sep 17 Comment Home run! Color is just right. Plenty of "pop", but realisticc. Sep 26th
26 Sep 17 Comment Very nice. I like IR. I suspect it looks "oversharpened" because of the IR. If it were my photo, I wouldn't try to soften it. The hard look conveys to me the struggle with the subject's disability. I wish you had dropped to one knee and gotten of of the subject's face. Sep 26th
26 Sep 17 Comment This is gorgeous. I wouldn't tpuch the tree on the left. It softens the effect of the building and adds to the mood. What did you do with Aurora? Sep 26th
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61 Sep 17 Comment I agree with Peggy. I would get rid of the branch at the lower left by cropping the left. That would move the net off center a bit more. The other branch needs cloning. Great shot Sep 17th
61 Sep 17 Comment This is a a very nicely done image. I have only two suggestions. The grey design you have added distracts ne from the wo en. The bottom of the picture, especially on the left, in my opinion is too dark. It makes the leading linhe (the bottom of the wall start in the lower corner and weakens the composition slightly. I see from the original the leading line does not start in the lower corner of the shot. These are very small points about a really excellent and creative photo.

Thank you for your supportive thoughts. WE have the strength		 Sep 17th
61 Sep 17 Comment I liked this immediately, because the color and the expression are bold. The hair needs some detail. The crop is spot on. A tiny suggestion of a smile would have been just right. Peggy's edits are spot on. Sep 17th
61 Sep 17 Comment I have a tilt shift lens, but I have never used it for a portrait. The right side of his face seems very soft and the left very sharp. The hands are in sharp focus the left side of his body is soft. I don't understand what you were attempting. If you were trying to blur the background, I suggest you mask it using the magic wand in Photoshop The curtain on his left is, in my opinion brighter than I would have made it. Sep 17th
61 Sep 17 Comment This is really great. I like her directness and the sense of presence that you have given. The color of the background seems to me to be too vibrant and competes with her. Otherwise I think this is just great. Sep 17th
61 Sep 17 Comment I agree with Peggy that the composition is very good I do wonder why her throat and arms are not converted to the comic book look in view of the fact that they were given white borders.I find the mixture of comic book and reality a bit distracting. Also the brown elongated spot on the lower right is also disconcerting in the final picture and the portraits as well. I really don't understand the comic book look in painting or photography, but I think its great to have experimentation, especially when done well as with this iage Sep 17th
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