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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 35 |
Oct 17 |
Reply |
Yes I think you are right it is overexposed so perhaps I will have another go at processing it to see if I can adjust the exposure. Thanks for your comments. |
Oct 16th |
| 35 |
Oct 17 |
Comment |
I so wanted to photograph this barn when we visited the Tetons a couple of years ago. Unfortunately it was winter and the barn was inaccessible. I too have seen several images of it but none previously in IR. I think you have processed this image extremely well, the clouds stand out well from the mountains. It is possible that I have seen this barn taken from a slightly higher view point so that the fence did not intrude so much but I could be mistaken. |
Oct 16th |
| 35 |
Oct 17 |
Comment |
A lovely and interesting barn but I too am disconcerted by the apparent slope of it. I imagine this is just an optical illusion although the fencing seems to slope as well. Possibly the ground is sloping downwards towards the left. I wonder if you could have moved to the right so as to use the fencing as a more obvious lead in line to the barn as an alternative to moving further to the left. |
Oct 16th |
| 35 |
Oct 17 |
Comment |
There are several different elements in this image and I think I might try to simplify it by taking some of these out. I find the wooden structure to the left of the tree and vehicle a little distracting and would be tempted to clone it out. As Sharon suggests I would also take out the pole/dead tree trunk in the background. I'd also crop and/or clone out the branches on the right side of the image. I like the quality of the light, particularly on the trees on the right in the background. |
Oct 16th |
| 35 |
Oct 17 |
Comment |
I like the foliage in this image but I do find that the road tends to lead my eye out of the picture. Unfortunately the lamp post isn't quite dominant enough to prevent this. Straightening the lamppost would help. Perhaps cropping a little off the left so that the lamppost is right on the edge of the image might also help. This would also place more emphasis on the dominant tree. |
Oct 16th |
| 35 |
Oct 17 |
Comment |
What a lovely square. I too thought it was in Italy or France before looking at your description. This makes a delightful subject for IR. The dappled light is beautiful as is the contrast between the tree and buildings. Overall a lovely image. |
Oct 16th |
| 35 |
Oct 17 |
Comment |
I think I would have made the bunker more dominant in the picture by excluding some of the foliage, although your image does demonstrate the extent to which the building has been engulfed. I think you could probably crop the top of the image to exclude the sky which would place more emphasis on the bunker and still retain much of the foliage. |
Oct 16th |
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