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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 46 |
May 18 |
Comment |
I like looking up, especially with a wide angle lens, my problem is I tend to fall over, doing it. I like you shot, darkening the sky would help bring out the clouds more. You could probably do the fix in camera raw, in the HSL and pick that shade of blue and use luminance slider darken it there, it would not affect anything else in the image. I like the colors that you found in this shot. |
May 13th |
| 46 |
May 18 |
Comment |
I think it is an OK shot, you did the processing well, but it is a little boring, you need something else in the shot, either more clouds or better yet an airplane in the background. |
May 13th |
| 46 |
May 18 |
Comment |
Nice shot good leading lines, I like the foreground, it makes it a little more interesting. Would not mind a little detail in the trees off of the beach, but not that important. |
May 13th |
| 46 |
May 18 |
Comment |
Don, welcome to the group. I think you did a good job on this one, to me it could use a little more contrast in the bottom part of the image mainly the water reflection. The tree on the left does not bother me that, nor the one in the center with the building. |
May 13th |
| 46 |
May 18 |
Comment |
Your timing was great, I like the composition and the removal of the sign would certainly help. I think you need to do something about the sky as well, it looks blotchy. I do like the star effect of the sun and the building look good to me as well. |
May 13th |
5 comments - 0 replies for Group 46
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| 50 |
May 18 |
Comment |
I like the monochrome version better, but agree that there is no focal point to the image. I also don't' like the fence on the left. The clouds are the interesting part of this image, the road does not do anything for me except for leading the person into the picture, it is just the images not something interesting in the image. |
May 12th |
| 50 |
May 18 |
Comment |
Nice composition, I like the shot, very interesting. I don't mind the stem, barely noticeable. It does bother me a little the very front of the table, below the top of the table, I would darken that part a little more. Otherwise a really good composition. |
May 12th |
| 50 |
May 18 |
Comment |
Good action and good expression on their faces. The mono helps you focus on the action. Good shot. |
May 12th |
| 50 |
May 18 |
Comment |
Yes, I agree with everyone, leaving the top of the mountain helps the image over the crop you currently have. I would also crop a little of the bottom off, I think you have too much beach. |
May 12th |
| 50 |
May 18 |
Comment |
I like your monochrome image the best and the treatment you gave it. I think it has a good story and a good composition. The color version is also interesting, but the green pants are a little too bright for me. Otherwise, the color one also works pretty well. |
May 12th |
| 50 |
May 18 |
Comment |
I pretty much agree with everyone, the wording on the building does not bother me, nor does the R on top. I do like the monochrome version over the color. I think the reflection is great. I sort of wish the whole building was there both the top and bottom, but this works pretty well as it is. |
May 12th |
6 comments - 0 replies for Group 50
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| 59 |
May 18 |
Comment |
Great detail and nice and sharp. I would crop just a little more off of the left side and a little off of the bottom, nice to have some room on the left, but I think you could crop that just a little more. I like the plain blue background of the sky. |
May 12th |
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| 59 |
May 18 |
Comment |
I also prefer your cropped one. Both are interesting, but the action looks better on the cropped one over the wider version. The guy on the left bothers me a lot and does not seem to add to the image. The same for the guy on the far right. |
May 12th |
| 59 |
May 18 |
Comment |
Good expression on his face. The problem I see is understanding the image, you can tell he is unhappy, but it is hard to say what the judges will think when they quickly look at it. I would also add a little more contrast to the image, it seems a little muddy. |
May 12th |
| 59 |
May 18 |
Comment |
I enjoy the game, have not understood the rules really well. So I agree with Karl, judges may have a hard time understanding what is going on. I had to look at it twice to understand the image, so it is hard to say what it will do with the judges. I do like the look on their faces and that everything is very sharp. Maybe a shot from the side more than from the front. I do like the shot. |
May 12th |
4 comments - 0 replies for Group 59
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15 comments - 0 replies Total
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