Activity for User 567 - Lane B Lewis - Photolaneartworks@gmail.com

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43 May 24 Comment May 22nd
43 May 24 Comment Interesting perspective a bug on a blade of grass. I would suggest cropping it on the right side right up to the two green buds . That gives you a triangle and your bug becomes the star. May 22nd
43 May 24 Reply Unfortunately, this isn't a mill. It is the name of the region and this is a town in the "River Mill Region" and this particular house was in the village . May 22nd
43 May 24 Comment YIKES!!!! Good job with the smoke and gels. May 22nd
43 May 24 Comment HONK! HONK! OUT"DA MY WAY! The head with the eye is a it soft ,the camera focused on the body and not the eye, which as you know is key for a great bird shot. The light splotch on its chest bothers me. I don't know if you tried to lighten it and just over did it or caught a flare. The soft background is pleasing. May 22nd
43 May 24 Comment My eye goes to the brightest which is the bush in the dead center, then to the cactus on the right middle. That part of the image is very nice and as an IR stands on its own. The dead cactus which I believe you intended to be the subject is out of focus and very dark. ( I would do boarder control and get rid of the bits and pieces along the edges.) I would have moved to my left and put that in focus, if that is what was intended. May 22nd
43 May 24 Comment This is almost a lovely image because it is calming, and the tones are pleasing. The composition is strong with the reflections pointing me to the iceberg which is the main character.
I think some dodging on the iceberg and burning below it would enhance the image. You might also work with curves. There is quite a bit of haloing and I would suggest going back to the state before you sharpened and redo it.Also, I would add a bit of more on the left side, it looks to my eye a little squished in. Then you would have, in my opinion a lovely image.		 May 22nd
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