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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 43 |
Jun 18 |
Reply |
I like the opening in the fence as a way for the viewer to step into the image. |
Jun 10th |
| 43 |
Jun 18 |
Reply |
I like the opening in the fence as a way for the viewer to step into the image. |
Jun 10th |
| 43 |
Jun 18 |
Reply |
Here it is with the metal gate cropped, kept some of the sky and only when I magnify it do I see the yellow flowers. Darn. |
Jun 10th |
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| 43 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
That's one way to get food on the table! That's a tough shot to get in a kayak with such a long lens. I like the mother and baby but it took me a while to figure out Dad. I couldn't tell if he was coming or going. I would try it in black and white. Also, with that light, I might have tried s silhouette. |
Jun 10th |
| 43 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
Interesting subject! Yes, I would tone down the saturation a bit. ( I know , I know you all like saturation...) would you consider darkening the shadows and possibly cropping a bit off the left side. It looks to me as if there is some distortion. |
Jun 10th |
| 43 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
This is a very peaceful image and I like the silhouette aspect. I agree, a bit of separation between the two figures would have been better. The spot of light in the tree bothers me, perhaps you could use a star effect if you have Topaz to calm it down. It is a nice image. |
Jun 10th |
| 43 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
What a fun image of the swans! I agree with Linda about the other swan. Perhaps you could clone him/her out? Also, Linda's suggestion of backing off on the vignetting. |
Jun 10th |
| 43 |
Jun 18 |
Comment |
Very interesting in black and white. I feel that the image is a bit busy. I don't know whether to look at the leaves or the butterfly. And yes, I see a purple something.
although Linda's version got rid of the tone. |
Jun 10th |
| 43 |
Jun 18 |
Reply |
Hi Harley,
I do have that composition. However, I felt that the blue sky against the barn and there were some yellow flowers ( primary colors) worked. I can't figure out what happened to the yellow flowers by the way! They were there.
I am going to see if cropping at the end of the metal fence and keeping some of the sky works. Stay tuned!!!!! |
Jun 10th |
5 comments - 4 replies for Group 43
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5 comments - 4 replies Total
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