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43 Mar 17 Reply Just thought is was a good use of Red, Green and Blue as primary colors. Mar 16th
43 Mar 17 Reply Thanks Mark,
I did come up with about the same crop and adjustments and I agree, it is all about the light, much better. Thanks for your time. 		Mar 15th
43 Mar 17 Comment What fun! Love the color and the lines. Perhaps I would have darkened the right corners so might my eye stayed in the image. It looks like you used a white vignette on the left edges which is fine. But the right side takes me off the image.Good one! Mar 15th
43 Mar 17 Comment Looks like the picture the Dr.took of my eye! I would have preferred the sun burst in the left corner to be placed where the white dot is situated. I like the use of RGB!
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43 Mar 17 Comment Bet he had a stiff neck when he got up! This is a wonderful story telling image and the soft colors add to the mood. If it were mine to work on, I would burn the white patches on both elbows, toning down the hot spot there and on the flap of his jacket. I would agree with Mark as far as dodging the face just a hair. I might be inclined to add a vignette to bring everything together and keep the eye where you want it.This is a wonderful image. Mar 15th
43 Mar 17 Comment This is a lovely image and I would have liked to have been with you. ( Depending on the temp of the water...) The one thing that jumps out at me is the color of the mountains on the right seem a bit blue and the sky is the same tone. I would like to see some separation. Perhaps that was the actual color but it doesn't look natural to my eye.
The leading lines on the sides are wonderful and the reflection in the foreground is lovely. Good job. 		Mar 15th
43 Mar 17 Comment This image certainly is moody and I agree with Mark, the sun doesn't do anything for it. Perhaps, toning down (just a tad, not a whole lot) the glistening area of water would bring everything into harmony. Very nice story telling capture.
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43 Mar 17 Reply Hi Tom,
I thought the trail was distracting also. I did a crop without it and didn't like the composition. So I burned the trail and I think it works much better. I liked the eye going into the woods. I will work with the tilt, I have seen it so many times now, I don't think I know what's right. I will give it a go. Am I allowed to post it again for everyone to see? Don't know. Thanks for you comments. 		Mar 8th
43 Mar 17 Comment I can't seem to figure out if it is straight or not. I think it is because the island is a bit tilted. everytime I look at it , I readjust it. I had a polarizer on the lens because I didn't have a ND filter with me.
I did a close up of the island and that is really neat.		 Mar 7th
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