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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 2 |
May 18 |
Comment |
I like this image the way you took it, Hung. Nothing needs to be improved in its display. Great shot. However, from an artistic viewpoint, I had a thought that if the window was opened on the right side instead of the left, then the opening would be facing into the image instead of outwards. That was on my mind when I concocted the image below - but maybe, on second thoughts, it does not make a difference. |
May 12th |
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| 2 |
May 18 |
Reply |
Tough, but fair (I hope). |
May 12th |
| 2 |
May 18 |
Comment |
Piers - from a compositional aspect, I don't think that there is sufficient contrast between the old and the new - meaning that there should be more junk and less new truck to better display that the truck is in a junkyard and not that there is just some junk surrounding a truck. The post processing was handled well to make the newness of the truck really stand out against the junk. |
May 9th |
| 2 |
May 18 |
Comment |
An interesting experiment but, in my eyes, it didn't work. I stared at this for quite a few minutes but I can't buy into it. If there was at least something in focus - like, perhaps, a guy in a rowboat in the lower third of the lake - then I wouldn't feel like I need to make an appointment with my optometrist. Sorry, Gary. |
May 9th |
| 2 |
May 18 |
Comment |
The coloring of the birds is beautiful but I think that this composition does not do it for me. For a nature shot, the head of the animal or bird should be visible and, perhaps, a later shot as you described of the three birds perched would be preferable. |
May 6th |
| 2 |
May 18 |
Comment |
I thought that this building looked familiar. Too bad you missed Superman coming out of one of the windows. However, although the building sides are vertical, the lines of the windows are not horizontal. I added some perspective correction to straighten them up and darkened the smaller building. I don't know whether you would agree, but I think I like this a little more and Superman will not loose his balance on a window ledge. |
May 6th |
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| 2 |
May 18 |
Comment |
It is a very tranquil scene and the composition of the image is very good. My feeling is that the pink lady's jacket color is too bright for the image - perhaps a better balance could be achieved if the rest of the scene was brightened a bit and I attach my proposal. |
May 6th |
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6 comments - 1 reply Total
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