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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 32 |
Oct 18 |
Comment |
I agree with the comments written regarding the lightening. The lighting on the model's face is bright - I can't imagine how unflattering the light was before it was reduced. You captured an emotion the model was trying to convey giving the image a dynamic feel. |
Oct 24th |
| 32 |
Oct 18 |
Comment |
I rather like the dark tone but agree that more contrast would help to separate the church from the cross . I'm thinking perhaps cropping a bit off the bottom would pull the eye up a bit. |
Oct 24th |
| 32 |
Oct 18 |
Comment |
I had the same thoughts as Diana regarding the cropping. This image is reminiscent of days gone by, although as my images suggest I've been in a nostalgic mood. I wouldn't have seen the potential from the original shot so my complements on your vision! |
Oct 24th |
| 32 |
Oct 18 |
Comment |
This reminds me of when I worked in NYC. Sometimes heading in to the city I needed to transfer trains and there were escalators identical to this. I like the composition although I'm thinking that the top and bottom of the middle escalators may be a bit too bright using the high contrast filter. It most likely isn't for competition. |
Oct 3rd |
| 32 |
Oct 18 |
Comment |
I don't have concerns regarding clarity either. I agree that you might consider removing the 2 animals in the foreground and perhaps cropping a bit off the right side. The dark tree (I assume it's a tree trunk) doesn't contribute all that much to the image. It does seem to be heading toward a fine art image and I find it holds my interest. |
Oct 3rd |
5 comments - 0 replies for Group 32
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| 65 |
Oct 18 |
Comment |
This image is very nice done. I like that the image is emerging from the darkness from the left lower corner. Emerging seems more likely when the flower is "moving upward" in the image. The somewhat brighter spots near the base of the leaves draw me in just a bit, but now starting to nitpick.
I too use recent images because it encourages me to try and incorporate comments into images. |
Oct 24th |
| 65 |
Oct 18 |
Reply |
I took your comments and played around a bit more - reduced the base and reflection in the remaining base, added some targeted micro-contrast to the salt and converted to monochrome. What do you think? |
Oct 24th |
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| 65 |
Oct 18 |
Comment |
The images of insects this close always give me reason to pause. I too would like more clarity overall as the multiple eyes are interesting. That said, it's not easy to obtain clarity unless you can shoot spiders in cooler weather. Some varieties are sleepy in the cold and therefore move less. Your colors are nice and off center crop is appropriate. |
Oct 24th |
| 65 |
Oct 18 |
Comment |
I love it! Clear and crisp, the colors are great, and the placement of the exploding drop it well done! Would you be able to share the original? It would be interesting to see where this began. |
Oct 3rd |
3 comments - 1 reply for Group 65
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8 comments - 1 reply Total
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