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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 54 |
Jun 25 |
Comment |
You already have a lot to think about so I will only add the work of two artists I follow on Digital Dialogue. In Group 34, look at Jan Handman's work especially in September 2024 and in February 2025. I was in this group prior to joining our group and am familiar with a lot of her composites. Also look at Nadia Trevon in Group 41, especially December 2024 and March 2025. These two artists' styles are very similar to yours. I thought you might enjoy looking at their work and learning from them. I know I have. |
Jun 20th |
| 54 |
Jun 25 |
Reply |
Thank you. |
Jun 20th |
| 54 |
Jun 25 |
Reply |
You wrote "uncomfortable" twice. I try to include an edge of disequilibrium in my images, and I'm happy it came through here. Of course, I agree with you about the size of the house. Even when I tried to make it larger, my hands would not obey. |
Jun 19th |
| 54 |
Jun 25 |
Reply |
Please see my comment to Maria. |
Jun 19th |
| 54 |
Jun 25 |
Reply |
I understand what you and Brad are saying about the size of the house. I envisioned the house being far away and the walk to the house being a long, rugged one over the rocky landscape. The placement of the house might depend on how close to the house the man is in the story you're telling. I've attached a compromise of sorts. The man is closer to the house than he is in my version but further away than in Maria's version. |
Jun 19th |
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| 54 |
Jun 25 |
Comment |
Your man certainly has "presence and confidence," and you captured his fire stick quite well. The net images are well rendered and eye-catching. Perhaps the net images are a bit too eye-catching and overpower even this confident man holding fire. I envision him captivating an audience so his persona can project better. You've got 2 good parts here, but, for me, they don't mesh. But save the colorful nets. They could come in handy in a future composite. |
Jun 1st |
| 54 |
Jun 25 |
Comment |
I, too, like the idea of small people in a regular sized world. 'The Incredible Shrinking Man," a science fiction movie of the 1950's, is indelibly etched into my memory because the shrinking man had to adapt to a full-sized world. Your cut-and-paste of the workers is quite good (love the broom); my only suggestion is that the full-sized world should be less overpowering. |
Jun 1st |
| 54 |
Jun 25 |
Comment |
Your spirit of spring is masterfully rendered. I'm sure George Lucas would be jealous. Your colors certainly communicate spring which, after a slow start, is finally arriving this week in the northeast. my only suggestion is to make the singular flower smaller so that it doesn't draw attention away from the spirit. |
Jun 1st |
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