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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 54 |
Sep 18 |
Reply |
There is a blur tool together with the sharpen tool and the smudge tool in Photoshop that I find works quite well on edges. The smudge tool is heavy-handed. |
Sep 7th |
| 54 |
Sep 18 |
Reply |
I understand what you're saying about the guitar and the chair, but I'm not telling a story. I'm attempting a surrealistic composite in which the images create disequilibrium by almost making sense, hence the Coke ad on an Amish wagon and the cat. You're right about darkening the edge. I'll give it a try. Thank you. |
Sep 6th |
| 54 |
Sep 18 |
Reply |
I agree about the red reflection on the roof of the carriage. I'll work on it. Thank you. |
Sep 6th |
| 54 |
Sep 18 |
Comment |
Aavo, Your idea for a well-equipped throne room is a book lovers dream. I hope you don't interpret the following observations as nit picking, but I pay a lot of attention to detail in my own composites. In addition, this is an advanced group. First of all, I disagree with the above comments about the curtains. You needed to shorten the curtains or else we wouldn't be able to eaves drop. The details that could be corrected to make a better throne room are, what looks like, the over-sharpening of the window and the books. Compare the snack table in Original 3 and in the Hideaway. The snack table in the hideaway is distorted. The throne is also distorted. Your idea is splendid, but for me, there are some easy corrections to make. |
Sep 3rd |
| 54 |
Sep 18 |
Comment |
Creativity lurks in our unconscious just waiting for the chance to make the image we have in mind morph into something else. In this case, the morph puts images in a place they don't belong and as a result creates a striking surrealist kind of composite. However, lighting and edges play havoc with composites. In such an environment, the girl and the giraffe would be lit differently from those in your composite. In addition, both have perfectly smooth skin and hair. The feathering tool in Photoshop is designed to care of edges. The opacity tool can do it, too.My camera club has trained me to be mindful of edges that aren't real. The eye catching surrealism in this composite may distract the viewer from the giveaway of the edges. |
Sep 2nd |
| 54 |
Sep 18 |
Comment |
The position of the man in the composite could be a man holding on because there is no gravity on his planet or a man doing flips. There is some gravity because there is mist, but it may no be enough to hold a man. You've created a mystery. There is a problem with the man, however. He is too bright for his surroundings and also too sharp. Try reducing the opacity a little. It does wonders in this type of situation. Don't add anything. It would spoil the mystery of the composite. |
Sep 2nd |
| 54 |
Sep 18 |
Comment |
Betty, I'm afraid I have to disagree with Phillipa. My comments may seem a bit direct, but I feel we are in this group to improve our skills. I have been trained by my camera club to look at the edges of the pieces that comprise a composite. The edges should not be sharp. Photoshop has a filter called "feathering" for just that purpose. It makes the edges soft without affecting the sharpness of the image as a whole. Also, all pieces should have the same lighting. The totem pole does not seem to have the same lighting as the 3 women. Lighting in a composite is tricky when the pieces come from various photos. One last observation. On my computer screen the skin of the women has a purple cast. If my computer is accurate, this can be corrected in Photoshop. |
Sep 2nd |
| 54 |
Sep 18 |
Comment |
Phillipa, I mentioned in a comment a few months back that the mantra of my camera club is not to place bright objects on the edge of a photo because bright objects attract the viewer's eye. Another mantra is to "make the edges of pieces that comprise composites real." Adding the fur to your cat has made the cat real. The only cat that would have a smooth back is the Mexican Hairless. The bright colours attract the eye, but the hair/edge makes the composite a success. |
Sep 2nd |
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