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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 21 |
Feb 17 |
Reply |
Joan, thank you for your additional feedback. Feedback is the reason we have this Digital Dialogue, and good or bad, it helps tremendously. |
Feb 27th |
| 21 |
Feb 17 |
Reply |
Brian, I appreciate your continued feedback. I found the PSD version of the photo so I was able to include more of the foreground, move the moon a little, and stretch the shadow a bit. Your suggestion plus opening up the landscape, I feel, imroves the photo. Thanks again for your feedback. |
Feb 25th |
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| 21 |
Feb 17 |
Reply |
Thank you for your feedback. You and Barrie are beginning to persuade me. I do have a question. Does the fact that none of the bigger rocks have a shadow bother you, or is the girl's shadow powerful enough to carry the picture? |
Feb 24th |
| 21 |
Feb 17 |
Comment |
The buildings in your composite are arranged in such a way as to lead the viewer's eye toward the horizon. The lighting and shadows add to the post-cataclysmic scene. You have definitely captured a surrealistic look. All that's missing is a drooping clock. |
Feb 20th |
| 21 |
Feb 17 |
Comment |
The background & foreground remind me of Edvard Munch's"The Scream." The photo is good enough to stand on its own without the gull. It draws my eye away from the rocks. What is "Flood" that you used on the water? |
Feb 13th |
| 21 |
Feb 17 |
Comment |
Barrie, I revised the original based on your suggestions. I couldn't find the "psd" version so I cut and pasted as best I could. Personally, I feel the initial impact of the original is lost with the main players off center. There seems to be something strong about everything being centered, so strong that the fact that the rocks do not have shadows is hardly noticeable. Thank you for your feedback. |
Feb 13th |
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| 21 |
Feb 17 |
Comment |
The car almost looks like it is coming out of the frame. I took the liberty to use PS paths to remove windows and reveal a piece of the background which I copied and pasted from original and placed on a new layer.Probably a matter of taste. Nice job of "compositing." |
Feb 10th |
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4 comments - 3 replies for Group 21
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4 comments - 3 replies Total
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