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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 41 |
May 23 |
Comment |
I see here website, https://janelazenbyart.com/, but under classes it says "No products were found matching your selection." |
May 19th |
| 41 |
May 23 |
Comment |
The layered effect works well here. I like how the static sculptures inspired you to add motion and make it more dynamic.
The swirls are a tad bright |
May 19th |
| 41 |
May 23 |
Comment |
This is a fun image
The colors are vibrant and the brush strokes add and the three makes it dynamic
I like the brushwork, what tutorials? "I followed a
series of tutorials given by Jane Lazenby where she taught how to make art brushes to make the background and how to fit the images together to tell a story. " |
May 19th |
| 41 |
May 23 |
Comment |
when is the book coming out? what a great series! good one!
I like it flipped as Brian did as it reads man looking to the moon that way
The man is floating a tad, so more clouds over that patchwork area might help. |
May 19th |
| 41 |
May 23 |
Reply |
I like this flipped composition, we read left to right and this man to moon makes me feel the images more than moon to man |
May 19th |
| 41 |
May 23 |
Comment |
what a feeling! I love the color and mood and atmosphere and the way the lamp is leaning.
I do wish that the shoes and hair were more pronounced, the scarf really confused me at first, I had to look at that image to see the red scarf and realize what it was.
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May 19th |
| 41 |
May 23 |
Comment |
The blend is done quite well, creative! good choice of images
Some things I can think to improve is to make the light and shadows more realistic (you have two suns)
-- you have two suns, the shadows and sun indicate sun from the back of the girls, then the sun is in the front
-- to make more of the images warmer, the foreground is warm, the middle is vool, and then it goes warm again. |
May 19th |
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| 41 |
May 23 |
Reply |
I agree about removing the effect from the branch, thank you! It would add to the trees are real, but birds are not real, lol. |
May 19th |
6 comments - 2 replies for Group 41
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| 44 |
May 23 |
Comment |
max, I hope one day you can take me around, you get to such great places!
Good toning, subject matter and composition, perhaps a little dahaze would make it pop a tad more? |
May 26th |
| 44 |
May 23 |
Comment |
I like the angle and composition, but the image falls a little flat to me tone wise. I would pop the sky a little more (especially since this is HDR, and nowadays you can select and mask and edit just the sky too, making some HDR needs much less) and tone down the foreground rocks. |
May 25th |
| 44 |
May 23 |
Comment |
wow, lots of texture, cool place and great composition. I will have to add this to my places to visit.
Thank you for the detailed explanation of the processing.
perhaps warm up the foreground a tad? |
May 25th |
| 44 |
May 23 |
Comment |
Dehazed |
May 25th |
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| 44 |
May 23 |
Comment |
love the subject and composition.
There seems to be a couple of hazy parts that could be tweaked |
May 25th |
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| 44 |
May 23 |
Comment |
I love this and wish that I was there with you!
The scene and depth and hill and barn and silo are awesome and the flipped sky really works very well. Stunning!
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May 24th |
6 comments - 0 replies for Group 44
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12 comments - 2 replies Total
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