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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 25 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
A great study in geometric shapes. The composition and lighting are spot on and the off angle enhances the interest. As Audrey points out there a several tiny white spots which attract the eye which are easy to remove. Also along the top edge-middle is a box on the wall which disrupts the smooth surfaces of all the columns. I know these a small nits, but fixing them will really enhance the image. |
Nov 21st |
| 25 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
Great capture. The suggestions of others definitely make for a stronger composition. The sharpness of his face helps draw the eye. If you cropped and get back the top of his head it would complete the image. |
Nov 21st |
| 25 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
Great composition, but the lighting and colors look a little flat. Audrey's changes help but I thing some color enhancement would make the color pop more. Also there are some dust spots in the sky that need to be removed. |
Nov 21st |
| 25 |
Nov 19 |
Reply |
Thanks for the comment and the adjustments. I tried to get symmetry using the transform tool in Lightroom and as you pointed out I was not quite there. I will try the Photoshop tools to improve the symmetry skills. |
Nov 21st |
| 25 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
My first thought was that the image is a abstract in nature. Nice composition and lighting. The fact that the white background different surfaces give the image depth. I agree with the changes Audrey made it removes the distractions close to the edges. |
Nov 21st |
| 25 |
Nov 19 |
Comment |
Great photo, with strong composition and color, but the light needs a small adjustment. I like Abe's change it helped focus the eye on the sunset. My reaction about the lighting was there are some blown out whites and clogged blacks. I went to Lightroom and checked the histogram. The lights are blown out on the right side in the patch of clear sky. I cropped the right side to remove the bright area. The blacks are clogged below all of the boats. I opened the shadows which reduced some of the clogging and brought out some of the color on the far shore. |
Nov 21st |
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| 25 |
Nov 19 |
Reply |
Thanks for the comment. Yes there are many nice ceilings, this is one of 4 different ones that turned out well. I was on a non-photographic tour so I did not have time to get down on the floor. I also had a platypod max with me which is better than the floor.Again time was the issue. |
Nov 11th |
5 comments - 2 replies for Group 25
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5 comments - 2 replies Total
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