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| Group |
Round |
C/R |
Comment |
Date |
Image |
| 45 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
I love perspective shots and this is a good one. I like the golden hue but think it needs a little more interest, like a lone figure in the distance or looking in the window. |
Aug 4th |
| 45 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
Good clarity, setting and focus for this shot. I've wanted to practice street photography, but I don't always have the patience to wait for a scene to appear. I like the angle of your shot, but I must admit, I wish they had glanced in your direction or they were looking in different directions to add some mystery to the "story". I don't mind the wider crop, but would suggest cloning out the howells alley words so that NASHVILLE was the only word. |
Aug 4th |
| 45 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
Great night shot and you caught it at just the right time with the blue sky instead of black. I like it very much and don't mind that there is nothing in the foreground but the tracks. The tracks are good leading lines, bringing my eye into the scene. I really like Ed's vertical/tighter crop. |
Aug 4th |
| 45 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
You have two good suggestions above. Richard's version turns it into an abstract with interesting lines. Ed's version lets me see the details under the water, which I like. I would suggest darkening the rock so that the water is the brightest area. |
Aug 4th |
| 45 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
First, I apologize for having the wrong original posted - not sure how that happened, but I no longer have your original.
I think this is a good idea and I can see why you were drawn to this. I have to agree with the comments above that the harsh sun and shadows cause a bit of a problem. The shadows on the canvas are distracting (and could be cloned out), as well as the sun on his arm and pallet knife. |
Aug 4th |
| 45 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
I love lighthouses. You have nice color and clarity and a straight horizon. I feel that the beautiful sky is competing with the lighthouse. I'm not sure which one you want me to focus on- the sky or the lighthouse/land. I would suggest cropping half the sky and a little on the right. This might make a great monochrome image, as well. |
Aug 4th |
6 comments - 0 replies for Group 45
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| 50 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
What a great old building! I like your crop which leaves just enough of the surrounding environment to give it context, but letting the building dominate the frame. I agree with Jeffrey's suggestions. his image is definitely worth playing with. |
Aug 4th |
| 50 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
I also like David's crop since the top section adds nothing to your image. You have great contrast and clarity in the car. I find the words a little distracting, so I would like to see what Gordon's suggestions would look like. If you try them, please post them in the comments. |
Aug 4th |
| 50 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
I like the monochrome version which emphasizes the curves and lines. It also has more "drama" than the color version. I would like to see a little more detail in the foreground trees. The S curve road really adds interest. Very nice. |
Aug 4th |
| 50 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
This is a departure from your usual style and it is well done. Love the reflections and, unlike the others, I like the buoys on the rope. For me, with this detail in the foreground, it adds more depth of filed to your image. My only suggestion is to reduce the structure in the sky. On my monitor, the sky is slightly noisy. |
Aug 4th |
| 50 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
I think both the color and the mono versions are good, especially the mono once it is darkened/more contrast. You have great clarity and detail. |
Aug 4th |
5 comments - 0 replies for Group 50
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| 57 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
A creative idea and I applaud your dedication to this. Not an easy task. I like the blurred background and swirling colors in the bubble. Next time you try it, maybe you could find a more interest subject (flowers?) for inside the bubble. |
Aug 17th |
| 57 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
I would say that your focus stacking was a success! You've inspired me to try it. This image is so sharp and the details are very compelling. Awesome job! |
Aug 17th |
| 57 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
Very touching and creative image that conveys emotion and tells a story that is left up to the viewers' imaginations. Your gritty texture adds to it. I think it is a good image that stands on its own merits as is. I also think that a wider view which included part of the truck would make a different and just as powerful image as well. Nice capture. |
Aug 17th |
| 57 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
I love this fun and vibrant image. Your focus, clarity and creativity work so well in this photo. I've thought about getting this filter; now I know I must! Great job! Let us know if you submit this to any competitions. I think it would do well. |
Aug 17th |
| 57 |
Aug 18 |
Reply |
Marcela, I appreciate all comments and would be disappointed if you never gave me suggestions for improvement. I like to submit my images to these groups to get feedback before I submit them in competition. I don't just submit my favorites. So, thanks for your comments. |
Aug 17th |
| 57 |
Aug 18 |
Reply |
I'm sorry, but I can't remember which filters I used. I usually start with Nik Color Efex and Viveza. |
Aug 17th |
| 57 |
Aug 18 |
Comment |
The lines of the bud are lovely and the water drops add interest. The background is nicely blurred, but I agree with the above comments that its bright spots are distracting from your main subject. The center of the bud is in focus and I wish all the petals were in focus as well. |
Aug 17th |
5 comments - 2 replies for Group 57
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16 comments - 2 replies Total
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