Activity for User 426 - Jack Florence Jr - jflorencejr@mac.com

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66 Apr 23 Reply Thanks Melanie, I love shooting through the windshield, even while driving! Usually I try to clean them up as Palli has done so it looks conventional. This time I was going for the perspective of a passenger, glad it piqued some interest. Apr 9th
66 Apr 23 Reply Thanks Henry, that's an interesting perspective! Apr 9th
66 Apr 23 Comment I like images that put the emphasis on true black and white, like this, Henry. I agree with the others about the top; an alternative would be to crop down a little further. Apr 7th
66 Apr 23 Comment Beautiful scene Emil, there are some nice compositional elements such as the leading line, the wheel, that take us through the scene. I think a slight vignette, like Gary added but perhaps a bit less, would be the version most to my liking. Apr 7th
66 Apr 23 Comment I like the way you composed this, Palli, the trees you've chosen to show, works very nicely. I also like the black sky. Gary's point is also well taken. Apr 3rd
66 Apr 23 Comment This is my kind of image, Gary, great job. The beautiful light from the lamp, and those diagonal shadows, home run. I kind of wish it didn't have the foreground sofa, but that's a minor point. Apr 3rd
66 Apr 23 Comment Nice job accentuating that beautiful curve, Charles. I find Gary's version completes it, st least to my eye, providing just the right mood. Apr 3rd
66 Apr 23 Comment I love it Gary, this is what I was after, thanks! Apr 2nd
66 Apr 23 Comment I think the main area of interest for me here, is the way the unconventional dress of the woman, interplays with the murals, and how she's positioned between. But the image doesn't quite have the impact for me that your exemplary landscapes do. Apr 2nd
66 Apr 23 Comment The contrast and clouds certainly make this a compelling image Melanie. But in a sense, by having two compelling subjects, the foreground grasses and the distant storm, it's a "ping pong" image, my eye keeps going back and forth.

You could do as palli suggests, I think you could even include more of the grasses as in the original, but I'd prefer to tone them down about so they don't steal attention from the more impactful scene in the distance.		 Apr 2nd
66 Apr 23 Comment That's palli! Yours is much improved. Though part of me wants the viewer to be looking through the windshield as I was… Apr 2nd
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86 Apr 23 Reply Rear camera Steven, a little more difficult to verify the shot, but the rear is the better camera right? Apr 11th
86 Apr 23 Comment It's quite impressive Quang, with the three distinct areas of interest, lots of depth and color in the bridge, we'll laid out and executed. Apr 9th
86 Apr 23 Reply Thanks Ruth I basically just aligned it with the palm of my hand. Apr 9th
86 Apr 23 Comment Believe it or not, I've been there, photographed this same barn, cute little town. I like the direction you took this Pat, the painterly makes it feel even more Americana, very nice. Apr 7th
86 Apr 23 Comment I have a different interpretation than Steven's; I enjoy the path and the classic white fence, it has a nice country lane mood to it, the flowers are just an accent. Very nice, is this home Ruth? Apr 7th
86 Apr 23 Comment Steven, regarding your question, I hadn't thought about it until I read your caption, so I think you're ok by me. There are some lovely leading lines here, as you've carefully composed this, the river, trees, even the clouds cooperate. I can't help but notice an image that wouldn't have been made midday is so compelling given the light, good job at noticing the opportunity. Apr 5th
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